Wow thanks for the feedback. If it's not hurting the ears, it's a win. I hear between tracks for everything I listen to and focus on the groove meat, while the rest becomes the salad, then to another part.

My past was the Cure, Mission, SoM, Nephilim, New Order, NMA and Front 242... but semi pro as Rush, FnM. I generally make complex rhythms as a bassist turned pianist. I hear them all, and it makes sense but not to everyone:D

You're right about the intro. Once vocals are added, I typically do a Rammstein-like talk-over for the begging with a single word or two. I do this to build the assault of the main verse. The song did originally start where you said :D. I'll take it aboard to start it there if the first part with vocals sucks. Typically I start all my songs in such a way. Here's an example you have to search it on youtube: Som Quatre Potes - cançó protesta igualtat l’accés l’espai públic amb gos - Xarn Ego. There's also Pixapins on the same channel which does the same. The rest of the songs are on hold with the Mastering producer.