The Dogs Tale And Looking For Feedback - Rapresent2

22nd Feb 2023 20:12 - 3 years ago
Description : Starts slow—but the bridge & chorus v. good. An industrial NIN, UX cyberpunk, glitch 90-20's cross over. Plays more with rhythm than chord progression. End version will have vocals and I'll kill tracks. Looking for feedback what you like and kill :D Be cool and brutal! Cheers

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give Rapresent2 some feedback.

Modnex
Modnex 23rd Mar 2023 04:05 - 3 years ago
The sounds are definitely industrial. There are so many different genres mixed into this one. It almost feels rock-ish with a tip of trance twinkled on top. You called it Cyberpunk glitch; if this is what that genre sounds like, I may need to dig deeper. Great work.
BaoBou
BaoBou 28th Feb 2023 14:31 - 3 years ago
Found your channel :)
Glad you agreed on the intro!
phantomproduction
phantomproduction 27th Feb 2023 11:07 - 3 years ago
nice sound and good mix , great job my friend !
Michael
dimestop
dimestop 26th Feb 2023 19:45 - 3 years ago
nice track bro, i like industrial sounds im a streetdancer. nice cyberpunk, the intro was good for me strong rythme as already mentioned good mix and production nice job
pseudoble
pseudoble 24th Feb 2023 02:47 - 3 years ago
Hey - I dont mind the slower start although many people never give a track a chance if it doesnt immediately appeal - the early post intro part of this track very much reminds me of early 'Cure' (no bad thing in my book) and then it gets a little more industrial with some nice cross rhythms happening - I like it and you could certainly build this into a real banger : )
Rapresent2
Rapresent2 replied 26th Feb 2023 - 3 years ago
Wow thanks for the feedback. If it's not hurting the ears, it's a win. I hear between tracks for everything I listen to and focus on the groove meat, while the rest becomes the salad, then to another part.

My past was the Cure, Mission, SoM, Nephilim, New Order, NMA and Front 242... but semi pro as Rush, FnM. I generally make complex rhythms as a bassist turned pianist. I hear them all, and it makes sense but not to everyone:D
BaoBou
BaoBou 22nd Feb 2023 21:52 - 3 years ago
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