I like it bro...i think it had a lot going for it. I think you could use another drum layer so that the drum feels closer to me when i'm listening as opposed to far away. (if that makes any sense). And also it could use some more melody...just a tad, not too much because I already love the synth you have already. But another melody to compliment that synth you have with really take this from a track...to a REAL PIECE OF MUSIC. Just my opinion. Keep up the good work.

I def just favorited this, hey do you mind if i remix it because i need your yes or no inorder to remix it

About the only critique I have has already been said, it def could use some vocals to break it up. You need to find someone to work with to do some acapellas for you :) Hardcore isn't really my thing but I liked this a lot, keep up the awesome work!

Lisa

Kawaii, is not really my type of music but I have a very open mind and so I'll listen all the way through.
It's very danceable if you were in a club.The synth sounds are first class and very much of this era.Drums are up front and makes the track charge along.
If you could get a vocal line that gave the tune a meaning it would improve it no end at present it is a bit repetitive but this would dissapear with a vox or another section.
Indeed this could be an outstanding track with more work.
Keep up the good work............just going to get some amphetamines..lol........dylanthermos.

Wow this one was very nice :) sounds damn cool and feel like "relaxing" hard track :) You need to get some "vocals" in it tho :)

It´s worth if u look for a singer!!
Your song is cool, but needs an acca-pella to become more intresting...
I suggest you also extend itadding a bassline and a strong synth at the end!!

The mark i´ll give to your song is a 7 1/2!! Bey

everything on this track is 9/10, but without a bassline, the tracks only a 7 or an 8. Still really like it though, this track's definately going places.