Really really cool work on the rhythms and what goes on between the synths and percs. Love it.

Downloaded this track! Excellent work. When I saw the genre was "deep house" I almost passed it by thinking it might be too loud/repetitious/monotonous. What you have is a groovy smoothie with a great bassline, nice pads and synths. You throw in a few breaks with the drum beats and if I would make any suggestion it would be to change up the drum beat occasionally - don't just drop it out - but utilize a drum that would change the pattern to create some build and maybe switch back to the original drum loop when you're winding down.

i like, it def kept me listening to see if anything new would happen. I could see this being played in a fashion store or something like that... It makes me want to go shopping lol

F i liked the first part (3 or 4 mins)of the track but agree about the pads to give a bit more depth. On a negative I would say that the track is too long and has places were not a lot is realy happening. I think u could easily strip out a couple of mins. On the right lines tho!

youve got some good combinations of sounds with an nice beat here, the track could do with a lil more filling out in placesperhaps by layering some sounds or like the suggestions below adding some kind of pads or some extra drum fills

tip... try to bounce some of your midi tracks to audio which should free up some cpu load, its wot i did before i upgraded my ram which sorts out the problem in the long run... also by bouncing to audio there are normally more options as far as fx go...you could try bouncing down like 8/16 bars of each channel(if you wanted to change the arrangement at all + add different fx) or the whole track(each midi channel seperatly) and then add the extra midi tracks for the pads or woteva you want to add... i hope this resolves your problem...dont forget to delete the now unused midi tracks and i would save another copy and call it (b) or sumthink incase it f's it up knowing wot computers can be like

You've got a great deep house track goin here. I really enjoy this bass line! I agree maybe some creepy sounding pads would fit in really well. Nice melodies! Great work!

i like ur track mate,its all good,but you asked
for suggestion...try adding some nice pad to ur
tune and you'll see the difrence i think it would work
very nicely together with ur tune,greetz;))peace