Wow, this is a great track. Wonderful work, my friend, and great vocals.

Faved

John

Great rhythm, great voice, great song.

This is a really fun tune, Couldnt help but nod my head side to side..Very relaxing..reminds me a bit of eric claptons work..but of course without the raspy "I've had a soar throat for years voice" lol

This is a song I could easily hear on the radion, nice production. You vocals are great on this one. The accordian was cool, don't hear a lot of that here and it adds a nice hometown feel to it. Faved!!

Wayne

Good job..Id thought will check your song..Like this one best..nice and layed back..You have a great sound to your voice...keep em comming ;) God Bless

sup man. your songs are very professional. i like that. in terms of sound quality and overal feel 10/10. onto to the singing great as well. very real. 10/10. awesome production man

Nice.
A proper song.
Good story, pro performance, engineering, human touch.
Well done.
Voltage

i liked this one, but need to work on the lyrics... they just seemed so jumbled together... you might be on to something though.

Hi

Mate you have talent plus, beautiful vocal and great guitar, you have a fan here mate, keep up the brilliant work man...

Estefano

hey,
this is an awesome track! i just love it! the text is well written and the sound of the whole track is just sounding 'good'!

please keep it up!

Your vox sound great as does the whole track. I'm gonna listen to it again when I have my headphones. Sounds clean to me. This track has a nice flow to it as well. I like! Good work.

great song you guys but what program do u use to record your vocals and this song is perfect to me i dosent need any more work, 10 stars with me....

great track, i am a huge fan of yours and used a loop in one of my tracks, love the feel is great and lyrics follow close

great job

This is a very strong song! Unlike some of the others who have reviewed, I'm not a big fan of overdubbing vocals, that's just me though. I agree this might sound better with out picking the bass. The mix sounds really nice though! Just listening to some of your stuff to hear how we could colab.

love the song man!!!hellyeah!!!keep rockn!!

This track was awesome - it had such a familiar feel to it - it was crisp - nice Lyrics as well -

agree with Coney (minus the cowbell lol -- but that is just me- it would fit the texture) and bcway , but I hear you in there!

soo nice!

Definitely play the bass with the pointer and middle finger!
no pick
in fact, if you have a stand-up bass you should use that lol
(wishful thinking-- right? I have been listening to a lot of MUTEMATH so that may be why)

sounds are definitely defined and in the mix
drums are layered in a fantastic fashion, great job with the mic placement!

Hmn... What is that... It's like.. I want...
http://www.massenburg.com/cgi-bin/ml/vocal_overdubbing.html?id=xffYSfdQ
vocal overdubs
but then cut volumes as accordingly
i would think that mono would be the best bet (which I am sure you are aware of- so you don't have anything phasing out in the stereo spectrum)

I mean-- I like your overdubs you have!
but - if you were to do multiple takes (identically) of the same vocal -- you would perhaps get a full round sound?

Like those big production techniques
fer example, I knew a guy that worked in a studio with Alice in Chains, and Layne Stayley actually had 40 tracks of overdubs JUST for his vocals -- CAN YOU IMAGINE?!?!

I know that Butch Vig, when he produced Nirvana's Nevermind; he had to convince Kurt Cobain to do overdubbing for a more shiny sound, by telling kurt John Lennon swoooore by vocal overdubs

I dunno,
It's a fantastic beautiful piece of work.
I would love to stare at the waveform

this is a really good track! the songwriting is fantastic, i agree with the reviews before me, you are really talented, and you have a some good potential to go pro. i wish you the best of luck!

p.s. and the guitar stuff you make is great!

Hey there. There is great character in your vocals. I've played professionally with many vocalists. Since they had to sing for 3 hours a night ( not steady, there were breaks ), anywhere from 3 to 6 nights a week, they had developed a vocal strength - ie singing from the diaphram to help them last and still be able to talk the next day. I fear that if you did this, it may modify your singing style *** you must not change your style !!!!!

Tsk ! Who played base ? Did they use a pick - I'm sure I could hear a pick, [sigh], I am not a fan of the base pick. I know I know I'm mister picky ( pun intended ) Now, more that ever, I must pick up some hardware so I can plug in my base to lay done tracks and loops, proper like - I would love to add a base line to your tune - which I fav'd. You are a songwriter and it would not be a great leap for you to go pro - your tons better that the drek that is spoon fed us by those so call DJ's or VJ's.

"Free credit report.com" lol the track at times reminds me of something those dudes from the commercial would do.

Nice to hear a real songwriter. I think you got hella talent! Graet stuff as usual!

Just for fun you should out some cow bell in the end! I think it would sound pretty good in there. Or even some type of flute part.