Nice track, keep up the good work and have fun with it.

all da beats you got would sound straight if you made the chorus stand out more. a chorus has 4bars dat repeat twice. if you don't know how long a bar is it's 1,2,3,4, but you probably know dat incase you didn't dare it is. i like da melodies in da beats and for da choruses dare could be another instrument dat you can spit or sing about da verses. if you put on vocals you have your main vocals and den you have adlibs. adlibs are what emphasize a certain word in a flow or in a chorus. you can put compression or reverb on dem to make your vocals have a certain effect. i got dat adlibs from expertvillage.com. keep making dem sick beats.

hey man, like spivkurl noted, the snare is hard and i like the alternate fills you are throwing in there sometimes too, yeah bro, this needs some Philly vocal love on top big time...would like to hear this again if you do that...sweet and melodic..wow, like those snare dragging kind of fills toward the end even more..yeah dude, Philly in the series for you man!!

victormusic01x

Very cool mix! I like the melody a lot! The snare sounds especially tasty too. This would sound good with some sweet vocals. Nice work!