Description : Please review!. This song I made out of royalty free loops, the vocals/lyrics are all mine. I am currently developing the song so this is not at all the final version, the quality needs to improve, it´s just for you to have an idea, I´ll be posting the real thing when it´s finished. It´s a very positive song! Here are the lyrics:
1st verse:
It´s hard to look back and see a history of suffering and struggling
There were days when I fell on my knees I couldnt take no more, I couldnt fight no more
Bridge:
But the world spins fast fast fast
Cant live in the past past past
Everything goes on and I feel strong enough to take on whatever life will put in my way
Chorus:
I´ve been left behind in darkness
And worked so hard for happiness
If I told you all the things I´ve been through
You could write a really sad and very very long book
But I never gave up (No)
Hold my head up high (Yeah)
As I reach the sky and it feels so right
It feels right (x3)
2nd verse:
What is life without all of the obstacles but an easy ride, for empty minds?
I have learned from all my distress, it helped me thicken my skin and made me strong within
Bridge:
In spite of pain and pain and pain
Hold on to your faith, faith, faith
What doesnt kill you makes you stronger and it readies you for a brand new day
Chorus:
I´ve been left behind in darkness
And worked so hard for happiness
If I told you all the things I´ve been through
You could write a really sad and very very long book
But I never gave up (No)
Hold my head up high (Yeah)
As I reach the sky and it feels so right
It feels right (x3)
Break:
You may fall, And feel cold
I´ve been there before
My back against the wall
But I got back on my feet
got rid of all my fears
After storms and darkness
I´ll be standing right heeeeeeere
Chorus:
I´ve been left behind in darkness
And worked so hard for happiness
If I told you all the things I´ve been through
You could write a really sad and very very long book
But I never gave up (No)
Hold my head up high (Yeah)
As I reach the sky and it feels so right
It feels right (x3)
It feels right, feels right, Feels (Riiiight, Riiiight, yeah! yeah!)
It feels right, feels right, feels right!
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Comments (7)
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This is a tight track i read u said that its not the final mix so i wont talk about anything i thought was worng with the production side of it, u got talent which is something that cant be bought everything else is fixable.....
What a treat. Cuz like I listened to the instrumental for this about 4 or so days ago and was so impressed by it. Sincerely.
AND NOW THIS.
Bro you write the music and sing the melodies that enhance anything they grace. I'm serious. You are going to bring so much light to spaces all over the place, and you'll never even know about most it.
Love when it goes to the acoustic part. Should do that again, it was sweet.
I'm so newly impressed by you. I hope you come back one day.
Deepest regrets if I never get to talk with you again - I hope all is well. Lighten up huh? Ok. Eat ya fkn fish.
this is one of the best tracks ive heard on looperman its pretty awesome :) keep making tracks like this (Y) are you using autotune on this? or vocoder or something? :)
Thank you for your review! ... I really appreciate comments like this!... And yes, I am using autotune on this one, however, as it´s not the actual final version it´s not properly tuned and stuff...
dude i am not pop, but i like this...although it is obviously not a final mix,the vocals need some clening up and a few other hiccups, yet,it is very easy to listen to. i believe you have a lot of potential and talent...keep it up. i love that you wrote lyrics...
Thank you! You are right, it is not at all the final mix, I didnt even use a filter for the mic when recording the vocals, I have a lot of cleaning up to do before releasing the final version... but I like it a lot and I am glad you like it too! Thanks for the review!
i am SO GLAD im not the only artist on here that believes there should be a pop genre option on the drop down list. i adore this piece. this sounds like "now", if that makes any sense...the beat is lovely and your vocal make a nice addition to the melody. nice job!
I know! There should be a pop option! I don´t get it! Pop is such a strong genre... anyways... Thank you very much for your review! I really appreciate it!
I think you need to pitch shift the bass line and maybe do the same with the two vocal tracks. It sounds like a happy song, but feels like its being dragged down by the lack of energy in the vocals. Raise the voice and give it more energy. This song could be more than what it is. Maybe the drums need more punch to it. The concept is very good, but the execution has some clean up and modifications to get this track bumping. It can really be something special. Cheers :)
Yes, I agree, the vocals need more energy, when I re-record it for final version I will put more effort into it and yes, the drums will have more punch... this is just let´s say a blueprint of what the song should be, I will post the real thing when it´s done. Thank you so much for your review!!!
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What a treat. Cuz like I listened to the instrumental for this about 4 or so days ago and was so impressed by it. Sincerely.
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Bro you write the music and sing the melodies that enhance anything they grace. I'm serious. You are going to bring so much light to spaces all over the place, and you'll never even know about most it.
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