young Jedi indeed... everything bear said was true...
listen to him, what he says comes from deep wisdom.
It is all your choice, at your age, anything is possible.
So believe in yourself and in your dreams, impossible is nothing.
yet remember... true success is NOT about money, fame, power...
true success is a long road... it is realizing the reason your here, knowing your purpose, your gift, what it is u LOVE TO DO and surrounding yourself with peers, teachers and mentors to cultivate that gift... then with practice, perseverance, and patients, life will find a way for u to make a living with your gift... living life loving what doing what you love, is priceless... it is true success... it is mastery...
something to strive for, young jedi...
a change for the better. ;-)

Your voice isn't that bad. Just need to develop it more, make it more powerful. I like the instrumental as well its basic but compliments your singing and rapping. You remind me of me :O your a similar age, this sounds like something I would make as well. If you want to work with me I'd be glad to, I (kinda) make beats so check my profile, listen, if you like email me. I think we'd get along!

yo.

bear told you everything important. ;)
the backings in your songs are really good, they're a really good base to develop your style.
what you've really to develop is your voice. don't be shy, "scream" into the mic, show your voice, don't hesistate, nobody we punish you for a nice tone, for a strong voice. thats the most important thing while singing, i think. ;)

i liked the song bc u created it yourself fam but im blowed 2
so dont do drugs lol
nice track

OK, young Jedi, after 83 listens, I think it's about time someone gave you a review. First off, you have skills. You just need some development and seasoning :)

I would suggest you sign up for every choir class available in school. I mean every last class you can find. What that will do is help you with pitch, breathing, phrasing, reading music, etc. I would also suggest you listen to some of the great hip hop artists on Looperman and study their phrasing, tempo, dynamics, flow. If you have questions, contact them and ask away. They will be happy to help you out.

Just keep doing what you are doing. Most people your age are sitting around playing video games and have no clue. You are developing a skill that will follow you through your entire life.

Well done. Hopefully the next review will come before the 186th listen :)

Bear