Description : Updated
This track is about broken relationships. I wrote this after one of my friends marriage broke up and saw the pain he was going through. I wrote it from a guys point of view, as we tend to get little or no sympathy at all in our lives in situations like this.
Special Thanks to Joyfulwave for mixing the vocals and mastering this for me, i would not have got a great track if he did not do such a fantastic job for me.
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Depeche Mode, Information Society, Human League... you know where to get your inspiration...
I love the transition from the saw to the filtered pad very much!!!
Love this 80's tune in the new century...
But give the vocals some more input gain and their own eq'ing space.. sometimes the vocals drop back into the music...
Love this track, faved!!!
Don't try trance... just stick with this genre, that's what you're really good at!!!
Hey thanks for your review, i am amazed many people find my music brings them good memories and good old times. Dance is my genre since a teen, but today dance and trance and club sounds all the same to me. So i try put it in the correct genre. My current two tracks are trance, so if you not listened, have a listen and see if its more or less the same, as i like my music between 130 to 140 bpm. Also like other genres, when i have a good idea haaa. It is hard to get vocalists for my tracks and when i do it is usually old school friends or tempt the a female at work to do it haaa, still most of my friends are vocal so it helps, as they play those sing a long playstation games...haa
Oh God! Love this! Very 80´s but still modern! Very clear vocals, and I love your voice! Reminds me of Depeche Mode... Ever wanna collab let me know, I´ll be honored to-
This is excellent! I'm hearing a bit of a Depeche Mode vibe on this one, which is very cool because I love them! The mixing and mastering is top notch! I think you did a great job conveying the feelings you intended! Awesome work! Faved for sure!
yeah i dig this tune, i like the whole 80's sound. the voice sounds very 80's i dig sad topic i know but great tune, i also think the drums are a bit repetative but you know what it works not much change needed with this.
great work
Smooth production man....I was wondering how I was going to relate the description of this track to just the music,then the vocals kicked in!....I dig the whole vibe here,it's balanced yet dynamic at the same time....a tricky subject and painful for many,but you've both kept to task and delivered something that's heartfelt yet at the same time is not drowning in it's own self pity...great work!..cheers Dave :)
Thank you for your review. Yes, people know i just do music, but i also like to surprise my listeners with my music also. I guess that is what made you say hmmm? until the vocals kicked in.
Well i am always learning, and hopefully get better and better as my music matures.
Nice track! Well mixed and bangin. Almost a rock track. Except the electronic feel makes it more of a club track. Did you do the vocals? They are quite good and appropriate. Impressive.
Thanks for your review and kind words. This is something new i was trying out and had the pleasure of being helped by Joyfulwave. Vocals were from a friend, not my voice. wish i could sing ha ha ha.
Good mxing and good dance music but this is a subject for another genre, I think. It's s hard to convey pain in adance genre.Vocals are hard for me, I never get them right, that's why I make holes for them and it sounds kind of weird. Either that or I amp them up so I can hear them. This is a smooooooooth track.
Thanks for your review, when i started this project, i did not want to do a sad kinda song like a ballard, like most songs are. So i try to make it enjoyable to listen to. Guess i wanted to be different, coming from unexpected direction.
Updated, if u care to take anther listen. : )
Liking this one a lot matey, nice piece, good beat and bassline, liking the vocals but to me they could come up a few notches as they seem to get lost a little in the mix, good arrangement here keeping it interesting for the whole trip, so pleased that Joyful could help you out my friend, he is one brilliant guy and musician, adding this one to favs my friend...Peace n Respect...Estefano...
Hi my friend, thanks for your review, i am glad you like this one, it is also a fav of mine too. Yes Joyfulwave and me been talking recently, got on well, he is one cool dude and i am big fan of his. My jaw dropped when he said he will help me this time as he was so busy...Vocals sound different on headphones and compare to speakers.
I still want to collab with you some time mate : )
Peace...
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Depeche Mode, Information Society, Human League... you know where to get your inspiration...
I love the transition from the saw to the filtered pad very much!!!
Love this 80's tune in the new century...
But give the vocals some more input gain and their own eq'ing space.. sometimes the vocals drop back into the music...
Love this track, faved!!!
Don't try trance... just stick with this genre, that's what you're really good at!!!
TCAS
Thanks.
Peace...
greetz DJ RV-Tex (rsmisch)
Encourages me to do better tracks in the future.
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Makes me do better tracks each time.
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great work
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the drum work is a bit repetitive but i really digg the vocals you have!
the synth is awsome too mate, keep up the awsome work!
Peace...
Well i am always learning, and hopefully get better and better as my music matures.
Thanks again.
Peace...
Anyways, I love the track.
Faved and Downloaded
John
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Jamie.
It has been updated if u want another listen : )
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Updated, if u care to take anther listen. : )
Peace...
Liking this one a lot matey, nice piece, good beat and bassline, liking the vocals but to me they could come up a few notches as they seem to get lost a little in the mix, good arrangement here keeping it interesting for the whole trip, so pleased that Joyful could help you out my friend, he is one brilliant guy and musician, adding this one to favs my friend...Peace n Respect...Estefano...
I still want to collab with you some time mate : )
Peace...