hey thats a cool ass song i love it well im a d.j. so hit me up lol i love ur music keep it up an call me some time an let me hear you sing;) well my name is albert aka bert bert take care an wish to hesr from you someday...

im going to have to agree with everyone else, great vocals! they truly are outstanding, with alot of heart and emotion put into the lyrics. i kinda like the eerie sound behind it, i think it fits nicely, kinda like an interlude track on a CD that leads to another song. i think the only thing that could make this better is if there was a little more energy. the track is great as is, but i can imagine it with a sort of intensity that really lifts it off the ground. it still feels a little like your in your comfort area, but i can tell that your slowly pushing your self further through out the track, but its kinda like an elevator in a building of 10 stories, but only goes up to the seventh floor.

im not criticizing, but theres just something itching under my skin that tells me, you have a real talent, and that even though this is really good, you could really do so much better. i love your voice, and i actually loved this track, but i bet you could do even better =) you should let me know next time you put out a new track, im really interested to hear some more of your work.

by default...and with your permission, i want to remix this with you???? i go by mistamista. so this kind of fits something that i want to do. so if your open to it, please do contact me at mistamista87@yahoo.com. you can check out my tracks that i have here on looper to give you a better idea of how i am with lyrics.

I agree with BrokenScythe....your vocals exceed the track. If you have some acapellas post them up and while I am certainly no RnB expert, I would like to use the vocals for a track.
Cheers,
Trax

this is nice. Theres a lot of heart in it. Your voice is very beautiful. I think you should get someone to produce something just for this vox. I dig the feel of the instrumental, but I think your voice can be complimented better by something else.
Great track, I really enjoyed it.