alessandro5c

good voice, good quality good work

nice track Alessandro, good voice and extremely well played piano, well done bro, nice words, from one song writer who knows how to use words, i always support vocalists for their skill and courage to be heard, well done nice work

complimenti

Great

Ahhh cumpleanos feliz!

Hola Alex, nice new track, but do check how you exported it because there is a lot of distortion and clipping. You may want to lower some of the volumes.
Keep creating!

Ooh, I think you went a bit overboard with the gain on the track and especially the vocals Alex, see if you can turn them down a bit? Leave some headroom.
Beautiful lyrics as always!

Ha, I see you uploaded our collab! That's great man - why don't you set it to featured so more people can hear it?
Oh, and add my name in the description ;)

Hi Alessandro. You did a really good job. BRAVO.
I am a music producer in France. I would be very interested to work with you.
How can I contact you?

Musically.

Another nice one Alessandro!
Let me know if you're up for a remix/collab!

Yeah that's a great step forward. Well done man!!

agreed with Bao in every word he said, the most important thing that your voice is outstanding and you have a raw talent to give the world stg special ...maybe you should collaborate somebody for the songwriting side of the project ...
hats off, Danke

Hey Alessandro, I think that super promising! You have your own voice and you're singing with passion.
I do think you can benefit from better mixing (and maybe a bit less effect on the vocals); and given that the track is 4:58 it wouldn't hurt to have some variation in the accompaniment, both so you can separate verse/chorus/break, but also to keep the listener interested, and to build towards a climax in the song.
Please take this as positive criticism, I think this is really promising, and I think you can be really proud of it!

EXCELLENT dude in sound and voice! just a question ; who sings ?
good work on this one!
Michael

My first thought was: what, like Hong Kong Joshua Wong, the jailed dissident and personal hero of mine? :D
I like the song, but to be honest, to me the autotune is distracting now. Can you make it less harsh? I would prefer a bit more natural voice, even if maybe not all of it is 100% in tune - that would also allow you to get the emotions more into the song. I would also consider to allow more dynamics in the vocals so you have more of a build-up.
All in all again a great effort man. Good work!

Hey dude! as Baobou can be a problem of volume or saturation on your composition!
Michael

The only thing is that the vocals are to heavy then the song would sound better

I think the song has potential, but (I hope you don't mind me being honest) it's not yet finished to my ears.

1) One thing I note is that the vocals are distorting. Not sure if that's compression or something else, but I think you can dial that back and have more of your real voice come out

2) You have your vocals and keyboard and no other instruments which is cool, not so many people dare do that, but then you need to put a lot of dynamic and the arc of the song in the keys and your voice.

Right now it sounds the same at the start as at the beginning, and I think you can make it richer, by for instance how loud you play/sing, by maybe adding a bit more rhythm i the chords, etc.

Think about it. I think you and your song deserve it. Good luck man!

These are some gorgeous!!! vocals (Lovely Falsetto also) and overall great song indeed. Nice! Work! Kudos!

Simple but effective, good voice, good melody!
Michael

It could be a nice song if it wasn't clipped in the mix. Maybe you should remix it? But otherwise very good! greet Manu

Really Lovely song - very nice vocal performance, fantastic voice, delicate arrangement, and good sound (except that it is too loud and yes I also suspect clipping a bit). I dont want to tell you how to suck eggs as Im somewhat a novice myself but Id drop it into reaper (its free to trial) and check for clipping and get a measure of the lufs

very nice you have a nice voice.

nice vocal but maybe clipping a little !

Beautifull song,voice,lyrics and sound.
Well done.