Hey that a great track
I always looking for collaboration with vocalist check out my tracks one of this days and if you like what you hear contact me we may dig a track
Cheers
thanks for the positive comment. I did check you out and your tracks are amazing!! unfortunately I cannot sing or rap. I just make beats and produce. I wish I did. you are very talented!
I like how the beat changes as you're singing. The first time it stood out to me was at :28. When I was 75% through listening to the track I decided that the lyrics are strong and heartfelt. You had a lot to say, and you got quite a bit out. I like that it doesn't sound like commercial popular hip hop. I'm a fan of people who don't follow the template. It does have an old school feel to it. I enjoyed it.
thank you for the comment. me and my homeboy(Boo), have been trying new things and thing he said it definitely doesn't sound like anything out there. thanks again for listening.
I really dig this. The overall quality needs some fine tuning, but the delivery is dope. Is that someone rapping on a mic, or did you find these vocals and cut em in? Beat is cool. nice bounce. If you need an engineer to mix and master your tracks, keep me in mind! peace and keep it up!
Thanks for listening and commenting! I used an accapella from here. help ?? Yeah, I got a big"for me big" project. I'm working with my boy i'm producing his album. It was soo much easier not dealing with someone. lol don't have any budget 0. to work with. I am offering volunteer positions...lol thx anyway.
wish you maybe split up the acapella to fit the beat rather than copy pastin on top
beat is dope foreal
great production
lyrics just dont fit at the constant tempo
hate to say it, just needs some work
much love and respect
thanks for your time
-CAP
well funny you said that, I did split it about half 1:50 to 2:05. I think Its on beat, oh o.k. I will try and find where its off. if you could help me out around the time or times, that would be helpful. thx
LEE
Not bad. It does seem a bit "all over the place". Did you sample the vocals into the beat or did someone spit a verse? If its a sample, it seems a bit "off". Doesnt ride the beat how it was meant to, but i like the effects you got on those vocals for the most part. Heavy sound to it. Also the whole track seems like its compressed too much. Looks like you slapped a limiter on it and cranked it WAY up, which is fine to an extent. It gets to the point where it reduces the quality which I think you ran into a bit here. Keep it up tho man
Thanks I have a wav file thats better. the hooks off and kinda long at times. I still like it. thanks for your input and listening, work in progress. thx
Prod and vocal work very wll on your track
I've got shabazz palace in mind. don't know why exactly but that's a great band so it's probably good news !
Keep on good job !!
Not bad man. Got a UGK feel to it that i enjoyed. Vocal quality lacked a bit, the flow was sloppy in SOME parts, but overall had a nice bounce. Keep at it
Although I'm not a big dance/electronic music fanatic and don't claim to know much about those genres I still do enjoy the occasional song that has a different feel or hook that appeals to me.
Ample space in the song, it's not blazing fast, it's not over compressed(could actually use some more) and it kinda has an island feel to it. I live at the beach, this would work at the bars/clubs. Cool track for just thowing it together!
Haha that's awesome man, I didn't even know that's what you meant that you got lyrics on this, sounds great, I just stopped by to return the favor of leaving feedback and got this surprise. Great job.
Ohhh yesss! You finally get a better sound of voice! The gap between 1st version and this is an abyss! Leaving aside the technical comments, next time you collab with Boo, try to adapt the flow so that it is not so pressing and that there are breaks to enjoy the music in the background (don't push the kicks too much! ahahah)
This is fire, sounds awesome together i have done that before too put different tracks together i have a song that's a macmiller beat with tupac lyrics and it turned out dope. Great track you made here.
I agree with Henry regarding raising the vocals a bit. Good job.
You're almost there, but just a wee bit more raising will make him sound a lot clearer in relation to the music.
I'd also like to add that you may want to double what the rapper says on the hook if he's not able to re-record this part: "Been thru a lot, but I'm still here, gotta keep pushing on, gotta persevere."
The reason I suggest this is because the hook needs to stand out more.
He's doing a fine job, but a bit more intensity (if he can record it again, that would be my first choice) or you can make it stand out by doubling it on another track.
THANKS for the fed back. I am in new territory working with an actual person, Ill get there. I am considering your suggestion about the hook, makes sense. I love learning, experimenting and creating. This has been 25+ years in the making. thanks again for your comment!
Thanks for the complement on the beat, That's the main thing I do is make beats. then blend them with accapellas. this is my first time in 10 years working with a person. He has talent , great voice and own style. thanks for listening and comment!
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Cheers
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beat is dope foreal
great production
lyrics just dont fit at the constant tempo
hate to say it, just needs some work
much love and respect
thanks for your time
-CAP
LEE
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I've got shabazz palace in mind. don't know why exactly but that's a great band so it's probably good news !
Keep on good job !!
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much love thank you for your time
-CAP
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Ample space in the song, it's not blazing fast, it's not over compressed(could actually use some more) and it kinda has an island feel to it. I live at the beach, this would work at the bars/clubs. Cool track for just thowing it together!
Wayne
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Well done.
Jamid
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I agree with Henry regarding raising the vocals a bit. Good job.
You're almost there, but just a wee bit more raising will make him sound a lot clearer in relation to the music.
I'd also like to add that you may want to double what the rapper says on the hook if he's not able to re-record this part: "Been thru a lot, but I'm still here, gotta keep pushing on, gotta persevere."
The reason I suggest this is because the hook needs to stand out more.
He's doing a fine job, but a bit more intensity (if he can record it again, that would be my first choice) or you can make it stand out by doubling it on another track.
I wish you all the best.
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