d2d

I really like this track. The picture it paints right from the beginning you can almost see the dimmed club lights or candles on the tables and band on stage. I don't know what else may be needed. Maybe what it really needs is nothing. Like those priceless statues with missing arms. It doesn't need to be made beautiful it already is.

p.s. Thanks for letting me known what axle F was saw the movie the other day and laughed my a off.

cool imust say...i love the drums...

yeah this track has shitloads of potential!!! If its on FL I would collab on it definitely if you wouldn't mind me puttin my own spin on what you have so far....email me on

salkizar@googlemail.com

Spk soon !

This is totally jammin, I really like your licks. This sounds like a song that could definitely use your special touch! Very cool work!

I do love the Joy division style guitars on this one, and you've fused it with some completely different styles. Not an easy task, but you've done it well. A very entertaining track so far!

hey,
this is an awesome track! i just love it! the text is well written and the sound of the whole track is just sounding 'good'!

please keep it up!

Great track! Wow this is awesome. Sounds really clean. Love the vocals. Nice little guitar parts. Lovin the solo section. Very fluid. Great job man!

Your vox sound great as does the whole track. I'm gonna listen to it again when I have my headphones. Sounds clean to me. This track has a nice flow to it as well. I like! Good work.

lovely, i like the words of the song. and u did a good work as always of the guitar! def a jazz track. respect!

Such a great track.Like this groovy jazz with this amazing guitar solo(nice clean sound).Is the singer from looperman?Think her voice is really perfect on that track
Faved!
French Kid

Great track man diggin that jazz

This is a very cool groovey tune. I might be confused, but there are hardly any vocals on this, intentional I'm assuming. Really nice guitar playing and tone. I really enjoy the relaxed rhythm of this track! Nice one!

EDIT- Seems like you got the upload problems sorted. The vocals are great! This is even more groovey now!

great song you guys but what program do u use to record your vocals and this song is perfect to me i dosent need any more work, 10 stars with me....

woo this is what im talking about i love tho drums they sound too live and that guitar man....... Im trying to be more versetial and i would love to make a beat like this. but "wow" this i really great stuff...

great track, i am a huge fan of yours and used a loop in one of my tracks, love the feel is great and lyrics follow close

great job

Hi again D2d,

I am listening to your updated version. I'd have to say it sounds more like Jazz than Blues. Just my opinion though.
It sounds very good and the guitar does sound very clean so it was worth getting it 'fixed up'. I usually have that done right away with all mine as well.

I think you did a very good job on this tune and it will be great to hear it with female vocals on it. So let me know when you have done that and I'll listen again.

You might want to post it again in the forum as an update....or I suppose wait till vocals are added first. :-)))
Thanks for steering me here, it was a pleasant treat!

Randy

Hi D2d,

Thanks for listening to my Blues/funk mix.

I had to come and listen to this tune here featuring some Blues.
The guitar and drums are right on. Good vocals as well. I don't sing myself.
Most of my blues songs are done using slide since not many on here do that. My 3 part blues tune is a good example.

I think you did a very nice job here and I am happy to be your 1st. reviewer.
Keep up the good work!!!
Randy

Extremely good guitar work on this track! I like the drums too, you never mentioned if you played them yourself. Nice work on this track either way!

This is a very strong song! Unlike some of the others who have reviewed, I'm not a big fan of overdubbing vocals, that's just me though. I agree this might sound better with out picking the bass. The mix sounds really nice though! Just listening to some of your stuff to hear how we could colab.

love the song man!!!hellyeah!!!keep rockn!!

This track was awesome - it had such a familiar feel to it - it was crisp - nice Lyrics as well -

agree with Coney (minus the cowbell lol -- but that is just me- it would fit the texture) and bcway , but I hear you in there!

soo nice!

Definitely play the bass with the pointer and middle finger!
no pick
in fact, if you have a stand-up bass you should use that lol
(wishful thinking-- right? I have been listening to a lot of MUTEMATH so that may be why)

sounds are definitely defined and in the mix
drums are layered in a fantastic fashion, great job with the mic placement!

Hmn... What is that... It's like.. I want...
http://www.massenburg.com/cgi-bin/ml/vocal_overdubbing.html?id=xffYSfdQ
vocal overdubs
but then cut volumes as accordingly
i would think that mono would be the best bet (which I am sure you are aware of- so you don't have anything phasing out in the stereo spectrum)

I mean-- I like your overdubs you have!
but - if you were to do multiple takes (identically) of the same vocal -- you would perhaps get a full round sound?

Like those big production techniques
fer example, I knew a guy that worked in a studio with Alice in Chains, and Layne Stayley actually had 40 tracks of overdubs JUST for his vocals -- CAN YOU IMAGINE?!?!

I know that Butch Vig, when he produced Nirvana's Nevermind; he had to convince Kurt Cobain to do overdubbing for a more shiny sound, by telling kurt John Lennon swoooore by vocal overdubs

I dunno,
It's a fantastic beautiful piece of work.
I would love to stare at the waveform

yo just contacted u via email holla back
love this baseline

This has almost a Cajun-ish stlye to it. I agree 100 percent with Spivkuri. Well done !

Love how the slide guitar compliments the beat so well. This track makes me want to tap my feet. This is a really good fusion of styles, it definitely works! Nice one!