Lonelyawxy

Hello, my name is Skilper and I created a YouTube channel.
I used your work in my video and gave credits with your name (which appears here as user) and track name.
If you want me to remove it, send me a message.

Video link:
youtu. be/s1StyM_oIh8

Channel link:
youtube. com/channel/UCOF9uW2pqyUHCWRrv2YgttQ

Great music

hey awxy, really feel this emo metal malaise. solid.

Totally Awesome track

BEST!

well done Lonely it definitely has an emotional feel, not surprising though, what your country has endured and still is. i agree a good vocal on your work would bring you success, but good vocalists are hard to find. although you could check out some of the singers on the forum looking to work with producers musicians etc. i uploaded a track just before your time that i dedicated to your people, i was totally shocked and devastated by the pictures i was seeing, the link is below if you would care to listen

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/233628

it could be a quality EP or LP listened to your tracks --- though, the hardest thing is still on the way --- to find a cool singer --- hope you'll get someone, cause your music is ready for the success ---
fistbump, Danke

still good dude! such a great composition! I like when the battery hits and I'm served! What can I say, great job as usual! I would like to see a Chester on vocals!
Michael

Hello, all in all a song that has mighty potential. The melody is great, but unfortunately gets a bit lost at times. But. as BouBou says, it's probably also due to the genre. I would also say you own a singer. Keep going with the song, build it up a bit. There's a lot more to it. Greetings Manu

Nice! All yours or you used any loops?
I feel you overpowered the mix a bit. That sort of comes with the genre, metal can have that, but I wouldn't mind a bit more clarity for the individual instruments. And I agree, try to write some lyrics and find a singer... even sing yourself :)
And Slava Ukrayini!

very good job on this one, good drum break, nice melody, like Danke a voice and it's perfect, once again great job!
Michael

Your sense of melodies are outstanding...great track again...Have tofind a singer to get the peak of your songs...fistbump,Danke

So Lonely, this is the second track where I find your guitar tone over the top to my ears. Great drive with a banging drum mix and awesome breaks. Great job.

Mark

I'm not present on instagram. and you can't solve it here

that sounds just great. I could sing and release a song co-written with you

very cool stadium-in-a-bedroom sound, it’s a rockandroll fantasy. nicely channeled experience!

hello, i chose a track at random and hey man i am digging this atmosphere a lot. i’m very drawn to moody explorations like this, and the arrangement is fresh, the piano is really good.

EXCELLENT! From the saturation on the entrance guitar and throughout to the banging and kicking drum mix all the way down with the expressive melodies this is FiRE! Well done Lonelyawxy! Very well done.

Mark

Nice tune! Maybe mix the bass down a bit and bring the treble up. I love the harmony and rhythm, its very nice!!

Hey Mister!

Another great track, specially wrote for the vocs! Hope you'll find someone ... melodies are dreat, guitars are on top as the drums but if you allow me to comment, the final mixing (or mastering) is a tad bit harsh ... even within it, the drum (the snare drum) sticks out a lot ... I listened to it on my tabletop speaker (they say that you should listen to the songs on the worst possible stuff, because if they sound well they say, then even more so with big stuff) ... so, the volume knob was all on three at scale (of course 10 is the maximum) ... when I turned it up, the sound became very mushy ...
but that's a sideline note ... the music is extraordinary ...
fistbump, Danke

No doubt, we can feel your influences, find a Chester for the voice and everything is perfect! great job man! I love that !
Michael

There is some great dynamics in the track. The song is solid, would love to hear some proper vocals on it.

I think it would benefit the song to maybe cut some of the limiting or compression on the master track. I think it would help separate the instruments a bit more and help cut some of the overdrive. It's just a bit hot to my ears and looking at the waveform it suggests that. But I also know some people want that sound and it may be done intentionally so take that all with what my old ears tell me. :)

Wayne

Nice intro, rich guitars, great melody. Rock at its finest. As others have already said. Now add vocals and it's wonderful! Greetings Manu

great track Lonely, good intro like the drum drop out on .35 the melody is lovely its delicate good soft rock the bass is gritty, like endless, vox on this would send it soaring. well done mate im enjoying what your bringing keep up the hard graft bro

nice mix love the 808s, nice track good job ;D