BlackFira

Wow this was really nice, love the smooth ambient feel of the track throughout. Not sure why you didn't push the track given the date you released it? But it is certainly a very enjoyable track, great job and fav.

Dennel

very nice minimalist piece, as Dennel says simple is some times great, it was a really good listen and a decent length for a short, nice synth work bro, i haven't got a clue what you on about regards gaming im old school space invaders pacman and defender :)) i can just about see a 60 inch screen these days

The dissonants I mentioned are most noticeable around say 1:58-2:02. Your bass, mid and high melodies all go in a different direction, which is great in itself, but they don't play well together here. But I'll say again, it could have been something you intended, that's why I was a bit careful :)

In any case, I was mostly hoping you could build on it because the tempo and energy in that same section is excellent and I wouldn't have minded if the track would have lasted a couple minutes longer :)

Good luck!!

Hey BlackFira, your track has a nice ambient feel to it and simplicity is not a bad thing at all. Great job

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really nice mix bro, great intro, good synth works and the melody is really nice plenty of changes to keep you interested and the sound quality is top notch on headset and speaker

the synth is dope great melody and feeling with this one good job

Love the intro. Great buildup. Has a "tonight could be magic" feel. Great job.

Great intro you have the listener interested and curious about whats to take place. Although for me I would have added more bass though that's just my opinion my preference

This is really promising, but I also think you can make it even better.
The intro is quite long; that's not so terrible but then I also want a longer payoff.
Also there are some interesting dissonants - maybe intended, but some of them didn't play well in my mind.

In any case, you're really talented and I'm sure you can develop this one further and make it as amazing as today's track!

Fantastic track. Brilliant atmosphere, really, really good. Instant favourite, and I'm off to bed. Whatever I do today, I can't touch this.

Great job!!

excellent tune, melody rocks, I love how you change the modal structure on the 3rd and 4th measures of every Stanza/ Ask someone to sing (female vox) and the vocaloids could be nice b-ground, but do create some space by adding a touch of verb or shimmer on it and widen that track (relay). good mix , sounds like an even eq spread

yeah bro don't be shy if you play your part in the community and you keep bringing good work and commenting on others you'll make good friends and people will offer you also, its all about growing and getting better we all join to have fun, your just as important as everyone else put collab request on your next tell them what you want and see how it goes singers like good tracks with rhythm space for verses and a catch change for a good hook chorus line, i might jump on one if its takes me, i admit im not the greatest but im not garbage either, they also tell me im a good song writer probably my strongest skill along with being a big promoter of our platform and wanting more people to join us so come on in Blackfira and show yourself

nice track bro great intro building to that fire bass, tight melody and drum too, its got variation, the vocal could be a few db higher for me but other than that its a good track. and you dont need to use vocoloids there's plenty singers here or real vocals for download just reach out and ask for a collab with someone you like