Wooster27

HI Wooster27....I listened to your track and would only suggest just a drop more on the lead acoustic....it's not standing out as much as it should but otherwise it's a very good track.

would love to know the timings for these lyrics, I'd like to give singing them a go

really nice beat but you got me i was expecting to hear some lyrics hahaha!!! i could easily put this to chill out genre
take care
peace

Love that beat

GREAT! beat with a beautiful melody here Wooster27 & so very thoughtful, it's an important topic also. So many people do not completely understand what the real cause of ADHD or inattentiveness is and very quickly put it down to the person being rude/unruly, so fair play to you for bringing awareness in this song and also for being a positive voice when so many do not take the time to try to understand what it is.

Cool I see found them really good, nice phrasing…covered the thought really well…nice

Hey W27 did you record the lyrics, not sure what I’m doing wrong but don’t hear the lyrics…?

I think you conveyed your message well.

Wow great song. Reminded me of Davey Jones from the monkeys!!
Very basic recording but captivating!!

nice playing, i like the chord changes and flow. the organ sound in the outro is what i was waiting for, very nice.

Hi again,

It's such a sweet tune, I have some other stuff working on but will give this a go and see what I can Come up with.

Hi Wooster,

This is such a pleasant and delightful track here to listen to. Very sweet! indeed. Keep up the GREAT! Work. Kudos! A lovely listen this morning. :)

Hello Wooster,

Every now and then I come across songs where I spontaneously think that they have been given too little attention in the commentary.

This is certainly the case with your song. It has a really "simple", very touching, endearing/lovable melody and... they are the hardest to get right, even if that seems contradictory at first.
I certainly didn't understand absolutely everything linguistically, but I understood so much that the content and emotion shine together and merge with the melody into a beautiful whole.

There are very few songs in which a person completely sheds all the worldly trappings, is absolutely with himself, completely human... Your song enriches the world! Thank you very much!

Merry Christmas and all the best for you!

Seelengold

Nice!

Wow!! That's great man, kudos. We're never too old to learn, as log as we remain young enough at heart.

Lovely chord progression!
For vocals I have tips:
1) there are a gazillion acapellas on this site. They melay not fit your chords exactly, but it's worth a browse (I did quite a few of those).
2) in the end if you need vocals, the best is to do it yourself. I've maintained for years that I can't sing, won't sing... And in the end, all I needed was a bit of confidence (and some lessons).

Just try it and get better every time, just as it is with everything else :)

Hey Wooster27,

This is such a delightful piece you have produced just very lovely indeed keep singing/having fun making music. Well done sir! :)

Hi there Wooster27,

This made me smile and feel like all will be right with the world soon enough it's such a song of hope loved it! very wholesome and authentic vocals/lyrics here which is absolutely lovely to listen to. Well Done Indeed! Faved

ANGELUS

I can handle the lyrics and vocals.
hit me up on my email for further work.

Love the track. Can I try my vocals on it.