littleeli

I like the end part cuz you sound more clear I wanted to put a beat over it

It doesn't suck, but yes, like the others said, work on the balance of the vocals. They're too "hot" and distort now, and they stick out too much in the mix. You can probably reduce it a good 12 dB and still have it be the main element.
Good luck!

Lotta peeps here. Lower the vocal for sure, they need to be blended into the beat and work with it.
Really thought the underlying beat was well put together otherwise.

littleeli, im a supporter of anyone who brings there own voice, so fair play you only been here 5 months, honest feedback, the last line you wrote is close, the vocal is to loud and far to harsh, you need to EQ it too, the vox sound raw with none or very little processing and you seem to be just shouting it out and its difficult to catch what your saying and im English, im just trying to help bro, started singing myself a year ago, i was shite but with constructive critique from the community helped me grow, but you got to learn how to engineer it better thats were all the magic happens, dont give up on this the beat is good revist the vox you need structured verse and breaks you got to be on beat, simple thinga like layer your vox X3 just off set them sidechain some reverb and a few milisecs delay to add to its character, take this as its meant bro, just help, ive worked with loads here on collabs i do everything from pop to rock but im best known for rapping and roasting everyone im contraversial but a massive community player, keep working hard Eli

lotta peeps gonna tell u to lower your Vocals...dont do it. up the backing trax and give em more bass....excellent track otherwise Homie

Th intro is like something out of a movie and you have that bossie flow. nice work.

lotta peeps gonna tell u to lower your Vocals...dont do it. up the backing trax and give em more bass....excellent track otherwise Homie