PaperKup

Love those drums and the way the synth weaves round them. Well composed and an enjoyable listen. Kay

This has a cool sonic landscape. I like the variations in the synths towards the middle, adds a lot of character together with the drum fills! Nice work

I was not expecting those strings and synths to come in. Got me off guard in a good way. Could see this being used in a lot of different ways!

That's excellent - and way too short! I want to know where this goes next! :)

A lovely, flowing piece - a little cinematic - I can imagine this going with the film 'Jonathan Livingstone Seagull' - this track creates pictures in ur mind. Kay

EXCELLENT

Hi Papercup, very particular mix, I can hear drums almost in metal style, nice synth sound. I like the effect on the heavy bass, I may suggest adding some bass in other parts of the track as well to add more power, unless that was intended of course :)

I think this track would be suitable for the film.

Hi PaperKup, what an experimental style. I love it. Like me, earlier in my music journey. I would give the snare a bit more punch at the lower end, but not more overall volume :-) Cheers, Oli

Slightly haunting. Got a bit of a cinematic feel - interesting mix - I enjoyed the track Kay

Solid. Glad to be of assistance, bud

Really sorry, I wanted to say "the meaning of your words".

Yes it is a prayer and the spoken way is emphasizing its content. Your music is accompanying in a very good way with out destructing the listener from the content of your words.
Very well done
Best wishes and Merry Christmas
Anthony

Beautiful it its own way, man. I dig it

Hello, this song, along with its lyrics, is very powerful. It certainly carries a message that resonates with many people, not just during this season. Although everyone probably has a different understanding of God than the early Christian myth, its still a wonderful piece. Great work and excellent quality!
Best wishes and a Merry Christmas, Manuela

Absolutely beautiful. The spoken prayer over the music really works. Kay

nice melody my friend needs adding to to fill it out and extended to a full track but you have a good platform to work with, although short it was a pleasant listen, nice start

There is a lot happening in the background that I would like to listen to, more clearly. To me it is a nice try that needs to be finished and to be unfolded. Keep up the good work
My best greetings, Anthony.

Hey there PaperKup.....1 review deserves another, I listened to your track and feel like there's more you want to say or more you want add to this.....it has the makings of something larger in feel. I like what I heard at any cost and enjoy this track.

Definitely a nice vibe!

beautiful - sounds like part of a film score Kay

My favourite here

Thumbs up, man.

It was fun working on this

Absolutely love how youve woven the Beatitudes into your song! Its a powerful reminder of the values we should all strive for. Beautiful message!