d2d
Create perform sleep and start over
Nashville TN USA, United States
Joined : 30th Jun 2009 - 15 years ago
d2d comments on tracks
d2d has posted 154 comments on other peoples tracks.
d2d has posted 154 comments on other peoples tracks.
on My Song 6 Spivkurl Collab by ZWR
on Diesel J Can't Sleep ft. Toxic X Voltage by Dieselj
I would actually change a small part with the vocal/acapella. I’d put more of an accent on the words “sleepâ€Â, “wondering†and “why†by making sure each word fell on a strong down beat. I’d put a pause before and after each word to REALLY put emphasis on them.
Thanks for sharing your music!
on I Can Not Sleep feat (Toxic x Voltage) by DjQest
Shows true artistry and creativity to take such a small idea (an acapella) & come up with a complete 6 min production… let alone do it in 6 hours.
Good luck!
on Move Along by ToxicVoltage
:)
on Sleeping On The Floor by Reximus
on 4 Instrumental by CONEYISLANDRECORDS
Is that you on vox?
on Busy Unit # 3 by bcway
What I hear on this is going to a double time feel with the drum loop & snare at some point... maybe change up the loop to a faster one for variety. Gaw, I'm not sure if I'm making sense. Definitely keep in the stutter edits. The music's great.
I believe I understand what you suggested, I will not be able to do something about it for a while -I've got something new on the burner and am not as fast as I once was with technology.
Am I correct in remembering ( yes, I am getting old, forgeting, and am repeating myself, yes, I am getting old, forgetting, and am repeating myself, ) seeing an offer you made here somewhere to do guitar tracks - One day I would very much like to take you up on that - your are very talented.
on Your Way by yurivaloli
Will you be putting more vocals on this?
on PeaceFuL SoluTioN by Signas21
on Shinobi Night Vision$ by Lady_Vipa_Vicious
on Around The World by slo
on Baby Your The One by Jairtheshadow
on Pulse Final Mix (Mastered by Travis Huckins) by Salkizar
on Skirts 2008' by raven73
on I Gave You by Birdy
I would suggest compressing the loop with the snare on it. The whole track could use a bit more level adjustments. The tones are very good, but I hear the balance between them could be a tad better. You may want to try listening to the mix at an extremely low level in mono. This will show you which elements/instruments need to come down in the mix.
Overall mixing is a skill you will hone easily. The creative work you are doing here is what draws me to your stuff. Good stuff!
on Van Halen meets Huey Lewis by Randall822
Don't believe I had seen your name before reviewing any of my previous tunes. I appreciate your comments very much and am glad you enjoyed this tune.
Putting a tune like this together takes a lot of time as you can imagine. It is a matter of making both tunes full out and then fitting them together so they will fit properly.
Later, and thanks again,
Randy
on Waves of Revelation by EVRiM
You might want to bring the vocal down in the mix a bit & reduce the effects on the vocals.
on Rock This Way by Randall822
Sorry for the very late reply. I have been working all my days off lately, and am slow in getting reviews back to people for this tune as there was quite a few.
I will listen to one of your tunes later today and give a review back as I am off and have more time. I appreciate your comments very much!
Randy
on "Rise To Power" *Freestyle by EthicSpeaks
on Ode to Arapaho by Spivkurl
on You will Be mine (nightmare mix) by JackRipper
on T.R.A.N.S.I.T.I.O.N. by DanielGtrman
on Rock can so easily turn into Blues.. by DanielGtrman
The middle section reminds me of Santana. you have a nice guitar tone on this one with tasty leads.
on body (first d&b) by liepniex
on .... by DJBun
I like this track. Keep them coming.