I must have listened to this track a dozen times, and it just sounds better every time. It has so much emotion in it, I’ve sung along to with my own idea of lyrics, it just grabs me every time. Brilliant.
Hi there, I have written some lyrics to go with your great track , I used the version by songmaker2448, hope you like them .
Second chance
10 sec intro
Strolling on a moonlit beach …hand in hand
Leaving our footprints there in … wet sand
Cosy evenings by the fire
Just so happy to be with her
Life couldn’t be any better than this
The warmth of her smile , her tender kiss
So what was I thinking on the night ….that I went astray
No excuse lost my head now I gotta pay
I have no right to ask I killed a sweet romance
But will she ever find a way to give me a second chance.
1: 14
We always said our love would last forever and a day
Then I tore it apart, broke her heart, blew it all away
The choices we make, chances we take, all come at a cost
And if you get it wrong, won’t be very long,
You’ll be counting what you’ve lost.
1: 46
I hope and I pray, there will come a day
When we’re together again,
But if you want the rainbow you gotta deal with the rain
I messed up big time , on that blurry, regretful night
And just saying sorry is never going to put things right.
break 2:17 to 2:26
I have no right to ask I killed a sweet romance
But now will I ever get that second chance.
Nice! Remarkably different from mine, I am impressed with how 2 people can take a tune and come up with such creative ideas! Way to go! I like it! You're good! Did you get my other message?
Must say you did a fantastic job on that track, you took nothing away from the original, which was great, but that guitar you added just gave it the finishing touch. Brilliant.
Thank you!
Actually, I am just a very young adult with a gift for writing lyrics. So I am trying to create tunes for my songs. In about 5-10 years, I plan to form my own band (I don't sing or play any instruments except the drums) to play my songs. I am in love with Pop rock music. How can I improve my tunes?
I would appreciate some tips and maybe even collaboration.
What kind of pop do you want me to upload? I am into Selena Gomez/Taylor Swift style Pop.
Hello again, I have been out of action for some time now but I’m getting back to work again. Would you be so kind as to post the translation of what the lady is saying at the beginning and end of the music. It will help me understand how to make the lyrics fit . Thank you. Stay safe. Blessed Be.
Hi there, this one definitely has a Celtic/ Folk feel to it. Do you have any objections to me having a go at putting some lyrics to it. Thanks, keep up the good work.
Just been listening to a couple of your tracks, what can I say, … they are so natural, really beautiful songs, great lyrics and sweet melodies. I’m a fan. I sincerely hope you make it in the music world, compared to some of the artificial rubbish that is churned out today you are streets ahead. Blessed Be.
Hello, I could not resist writing some lyrics to this lovely piece of music. I have called it “Chasing a Rainbow “, I have done a test recording and I think the result fits your music perfectly. If you are interested in hearing it please let me know. Blessed Be.
Lovely dedication, and a great piece of music. Funny how life goes around…. we are perfect strangers…yet have things in common…I was born and lived in Brixton and Shoreditch for many years and I also have a German friend…well actually I was married to one, but she has sadly passed away.
Sorry to hear about your loss!! Yes music helps us deal with our happy and our sad moments - and sometimes it can make something good come out of a bad situation.
Btw that's a 6 hours trip from where I live to where you live - I can sort of get wanting to distance yourself from London, but holy carp man, that's a lot of distance ;)
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on NO TIME by songmaker2448
on NO TIME by songmaker2448
on NO TIME by songmaker2448
on Second Chance by 1992g
on Second Chance by 1992g
on Second Chance by 1992g
Second chance
10 sec intro
Strolling on a moonlit beach …hand in hand
Leaving our footprints there in … wet sand
Cosy evenings by the fire
Just so happy to be with her
Life couldn’t be any better than this
The warmth of her smile , her tender kiss
So what was I thinking on the night ….that I went astray
No excuse lost my head now I gotta pay
I have no right to ask I killed a sweet romance
But will she ever find a way to give me a second chance.
1: 14
We always said our love would last forever and a day
Then I tore it apart, broke her heart, blew it all away
The choices we make, chances we take, all come at a cost
And if you get it wrong, won’t be very long,
You’ll be counting what you’ve lost.
1: 46
I hope and I pray, there will come a day
When we’re together again,
But if you want the rainbow you gotta deal with the rain
I messed up big time , on that blurry, regretful night
And just saying sorry is never going to put things right.
break 2:17 to 2:26
I have no right to ask I killed a sweet romance
But now will I ever get that second chance.
on Second Chance by songmaker2448
on Second Chance by 1992g
Actually, I am just a very young adult with a gift for writing lyrics. So I am trying to create tunes for my songs. In about 5-10 years, I plan to form my own band (I don't sing or play any instruments except the drums) to play my songs. I am in love with Pop rock music. How can I improve my tunes?
I would appreciate some tips and maybe even collaboration.
What kind of pop do you want me to upload? I am into Selena Gomez/Taylor Swift style Pop.
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Beifall weiter Musik machen.
Btw that's a 6 hours trip from where I live to where you live - I can sort of get wanting to distance yourself from London, but holy carp man, that's a lot of distance ;)
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Wooster.
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