RyanSeverns

Determined :)

Elizabethtown, KY, United States

Joined : 12th Jan 2011 - 14 years ago

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RyanSeverns comments on tracks

RyanSeverns has posted 3 comments on other peoples tracks.

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RyanSeverns 12th Jul 2011 23:55 - 13 years ago

on Rain Serenade by JWilson

The title of this track had me captivated from the start, and then I listened to it... you have a way of capturing natural things in life through your music in such an awesome way. I love this track and could definitely hear myself wanting to do a pop rock remix of the track, adding melody/lyrics... Already could hear lyrics and melody for a potential hook:

"Can you hear it?
Can you feel it?
It's my rain serenade,
My rain serenade!"

Very simple, but the lyrics for the verses could express the singer going through some challenging times, like it's pouring rain, but he sees the good in it all and hears/feels it like it is a beautiful serenade sung directly to him. Again, I love this track. And if it's cool, I'd love to attempt a remix. Not sure when I can get to it, but I would love that. - Sevy

JWilson replied Unknown

Sorry for the very late reply, just looked at my response boxes. Thanks for the review, and of coarse you can have a go at it. Would love to hear it.

RyanSeverns 12th Jul 2011 23:45 - 13 years ago

on Good Morning by JWilson

Love this track! It really is a feel good track that would be great to start and end your day. I may download it and use it as my phone alarm if thats cool :) - Sevy

JWilson replied Unknown

Thanks Ryan, that would be really cool. Probably my first ringtone download.

RyanSeverns 12th Jan 2011 04:17 - 14 years ago

on Come Back Down feat K Dilemma - Chill Out by JoyfulWAVE

JW, this is one of my new favorites of yours! You always have some of the most unique and sweet tracks around. Love it!

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