TheFrenZ

Great track, loving it.

Hi Rita, what a great song, loving it, keep them coming :-)

WOW, wonderful track, great music, great vocal, well done, glad you shared it.

A bit late for happy Easter wishes, but what a great song, loving it.

Great track, well done, I enjoyed it, let's dance

I love it, beautiful song, I know how hard it is to make music to accompany an acapella, you did it very well.
For myself, I would lower the bass a little.

Hi Oli, what a nice track, loving it.
Would you mind when I give it a try to dutchify this track?

Interesting track, I like it a lot

Nice song, good flow.
Sorry for my personal opinion: I think it could be much better. I feel like the chase for loudness has degraded the overall sound.

My second attempt, created a new beat and adjusted the vocal to fit. As usual heavy on reverb and delay. Hope you like it.
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/254068

Wonderful track, and as mentioned, quite a journey.
But I'm missing the end! It's so abrupt that it sounds clipped.

I like it, well done, new hints for my second attempt :-)

Well done Rita, great result. That's the next step I like to do, blend the vocals into a new beat, but that's a major task, you did that well :-)

My humble contribution: True Sister - Shades Of Hate - TheFrenZ Remix
Desecration of the True Sister song "Shades Of Hate"
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/253975

Sounds great, I give it a try...

Hi Rita, nice beat

Hi Rita, I did not do much, just tweak a little bit.

The extra voices is you, I took 4 copies of your vocal for the chorus parts.
Each copy received some treatment to have slightly different timbre and timings like it was sang by someone else.
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Reaper has stretch markers to compress/stretch parts of an audio item. So I stretched/compressed each copy on multiple points in the audio a little bit to have slightly different timings for each voice, then pitched up 1 octave and corrected the formant (avoid mickey mouse voice) so each voice sounds a little bit different, and different to your original)
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Normally you would have a real choir. But you can simulate that yourself by singing multiple extra takes for the chorus ("choir") like you do for the background voice, now just more takes (separate recordings/audio files), and in this case preferably 1 octave higher to eliminate the need to pitch.
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Put each "choir" take in a separate track in your DAW, match all roughly to your you main vocal so they sound like a "choir", then spread the voices by changing the PAN for each "choir" voice, you get width in the sound. If possible group them or send the output to a bus, put some reverb on the "choir" and take the "choir" volume down, the main vocal should virtually stand in front of the audience, the "choir" in the back accompanying the main vocalist, adjust to your taste.
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The guitar part was a VST (NI Kontakt, lib Kontakt, Rock Guitar) with an automation on volume to fade the guitar sound in and out.

As mentioned before, I loved your original track and just had to "play" with it :-)

Hi Rita, well done, I'm loving it so much I had to play with it :-)

Great work Rita :-)
Mooi liedje

I like the result even in the (still?) unfinished state.
I did some Silver Bella / Ashes and Dreams mixes myself, didn't hear this one before :-) I'm to busy creating :-(

I like it, lots of variations but can't specify like the musicians among us.
Now sorry for my comment: I listened with studio speakers and audio headset and heard something strange. From 00:23 to 01:24 I experienced a distortion. So I took the studio headset and heard a sub bass. After running the sound through an EQ I found a 20-35 Hz frequency that is considerably louder than the rest.
Again sorry if this was intentional and my equipment is simply not up to par :-)

Hi Rita, interesting combination, I like it.

Good job, I like the track, personally love the base and vocals.
I can imagine the task at hand to get a result like this, I wasn't able to create something comparable yet.

Great track, loving it. Very enjoyable ride.

I like this song, played it multiple times on speakers and headset to catch the lyrics, but my ears aren't the best ;-)
Nice beat and vocals, can relate to the story :-)