Description : A sudden outburst of inspiration and here is the result. Sorry about the sucky name it's just the best name i could come up with that can describe the components of the song reviews always appreciated :D
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Comments (16)
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I think the first thing I'm noticing is that your turnarounds and sound selection are luring me in all the time, very smooth, is this finished or are you putting more on top, this seems like it go into alot of different directions...like this and will try to listen to more of your stuff...thanks for posting your work!!
victormusic01x....in the nyC....movin' to the beat!
ud be up on your toes dancing to this one, i agree wiv djcliff about the fills etc but hey onwards and upwards, you've obviously got an ear for a catchy tune so if it aint broke dont fix it
The synth in the background..
Why soo subdued? the strings/pad? dude... YOu soo read music.
You have song setup nailed, but changing up the key along with both the arp and stuff would take this to the next level.
SUPER star. lmao.. I am a nerd.
I think the synth and then taking whatever the baseline is and going 7 notes down on the 1st down beat.... something like that... It will cause some tension and change the track...
BUT despite my criticism, You know I am a fan, your music is soo straight up and well produced. I love the soft/punchy arp and then the hard synth.
AWESOME.
yer totally agree with ryckio, but there is a point where you can't keep refining, because you just get to critical of it, so once your happy with it just leave it!
but yer, i like the tune, its simple and has great elements in it. ditto to eshar, id bust a move on this baby HAHAHA
Thanks mate
I prefer to leave my old tracks as they are cause i work on em till i get satisfied and by that i'm usually getting bored too and don't wanna touch em as long i don't feel like i can surely improve them.
I heard your trak a couple of times. Very good arrangements, keep up the good work. You got a very good sound. My advice, keep revising and refining it. Listen it more and more and look ways to enhance it. :)
-Ryck
Loving the cymbal.. and yes it does remind me of sandstorm.. good call. I like the synth too.. very catchy. Maybe a little mor on the bass front but good work all the same.. Liking your work dude.
Hey I'd like to say first of all I like the lead synth. Maybe try adding some drum fill-in's here and there, and a build up break in the middle that ties in to the main synth for an explosive end loop. Cool stuff yo!
Glad you liked it, about the fill-in's it could be but i dunno i have some hostility against them :D Also about the middle i dunno about you but i'm in love with the moment that both synths kick-in. And about the explosive end loop i know exactly what you mean but these aren't to be found everywhere you know..I have one in the end of "Noize"
Some of these are great names Neptune is a great name i wonder if it's fitting anyway i will listen ya + i think i will be stealing mannana mata too i have interest in spanish ^^
Thx mate
So I guess this was created in FS Studio going by the title!! LOL!!
NICE production on it man!! Think it needs more melody though. A bit repetitive for me...Try to get a nice lead on it with a break somewhere too..will make all the difference.
Thx mate you acted quite fast here i just finished listening the song after i uploaded it :D
Also great avatar i never noticed you here before actually you have some great tracks now i know you thx to the avatar lol xD
my bad then sry :P
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victormusic01x....in the nyC....movin' to the beat!
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Why soo subdued? the strings/pad? dude... YOu soo read music.
You have song setup nailed, but changing up the key along with both the arp and stuff would take this to the next level.
SUPER star. lmao.. I am a nerd.
I think the synth and then taking whatever the baseline is and going 7 notes down on the 1st down beat.... something like that... It will cause some tension and change the track...
BUT despite my criticism, You know I am a fan, your music is soo straight up and well produced. I love the soft/punchy arp and then the hard synth.
AWESOME.
FUCK YAH.
tee hee
yer totally agree with ryckio, but there is a point where you can't keep refining, because you just get to critical of it, so once your happy with it just leave it!
but yer, i like the tune, its simple and has great elements in it. ditto to eshar, id bust a move on this baby HAHAHA
keep it up mate!
B.S
I prefer to leave my old tracks as they are cause i work on em till i get satisfied and by that i'm usually getting bored too and don't wanna touch em as long i don't feel like i can surely improve them.
Babe? The tune or...? LOL kidding, thanks again
-Ryck
well done
Trax
Neptune. But I want this one..
lol
Mannana Mata, (which in spanish means "Tomorrow Kills")
Severance.
Peace Pill.
The Penguin in the Pink Overcoat.
Nothing? These were some names I thought of checking out your track.
Thx mate
synth is really catchy but cool
its on the brink of trance/techno (by the riff)
then it goes back to dance lol
:-)
-bri
Thx for the review
NICE production on it man!! Think it needs more melody though. A bit repetitive for me...Try to get a nice lead on it with a break somewhere too..will make all the difference.
Thx for the review i find it a bit repetitive too but i have some other ideas so we will see if there'll be a new melody or not ;)
Keep up the good work!
Edit after review:
Btw thx for the reveiw1 :D
and about the avatar... I have always had that avatar :P
Also great avatar i never noticed you here before actually you have some great tracks now i know you thx to the avatar lol xD
my bad then sry :P