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27th Nov 2013 10:30 - 11 years ago
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Description : Started out as a slow song but no....

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StaticNomad
StaticNomad 29th Nov 2013 00:36 - 11 years ago
Sorry if I'm perhaps being pedantic but I wasn't suggesting changing the drum tempo (though you could ) but, instead, the drum groove as well as the drum kit used. So, you could have the same tempo but swing the drums on an acoustic kit that would make it jazzier rather than housier. This could fit well with the piano too.

You're good at doing melodic electronic music and there's lots to like in your tracks. Yet sometimes I feel they're a little too genre-based ie do things that I've heard too often in the particular genre. Trying to get some other flavours in there might help and would probably make the tracks stand out more.

As I said, I'm really making suggestions based on what I might do. But I only have my ears and ideas and do try to think differently. It's all just music anyway and you really can make pretty much anything fit any other sound if you work at it. Sometimes it's a lot easier than you might think!

Good luck.
srbrown7
srbrown7 replied 29th Nov 2013 - 11 years ago
I really like your idea and I meant not making the drums faster but with more syncopation. Its been a millenium since I studied music so my terms can be way off the mark compared to what I mean! I'll get Superior Drummer on the job! You are right with the genre-based stuff as its easy and not so time consuming however I should get some experimentation going. Appreciate your feedback as always.
Steve
brillbilly
brillbilly 28th Nov 2013 18:57 - 11 years ago
Beautiful progressive start.!

love that gentle pan effect.!

Real nice kick off with sweet synths n real nice feel good vibs.!

Love the rich keys in this too.!

This is a real nice track to just let it do its thing!

Very nice work!

Got me rocking.!

***bb***
srbrown7
srbrown7 replied 28th Nov 2013 - 11 years ago
Hi, really glad you enjoyed this one. I had a lot of fun with it as it evolved from the sombre start to the almost anthem end....I was eager to keep it going but as awlays less is more.
Thanks for the great feedback.
Steve
Abysss
Abysss 28th Nov 2013 18:22 - 11 years ago
the bottom end in that track is so fat ... great tune
srbrown7
srbrown7 replied 28th Nov 2013 - 11 years ago
Hi, thanks for listening and really glad you liked it.
Cheers
Steve
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 28th Nov 2013 11:42 - 11 years ago
Yes, I certainly did hear the crackle intro as record scratch rather than rain. I thought it suited it really well.

Maybe you could also add some rain or small amounts of other atmospheric FX - perhaps almost as fills at the end of the bar.

That piano is cool too.

I like the drumless drop on 1:32 and how the delayed note fades out.

I find the rest is pleasant though I'm generally not such a house fan. I think I would have preferred the main style to be something else groove-wise - funk grooves, d'n'b, whatever. Or swing jazz would be cool.

Actually I'd really like it if you had swing jazz acoustic drums and kept the same other instruments as it would be the kind of genre crossover I'm into. And would be unusual.

Just an idea based on my preferences. You go with yours...
srbrown7
srbrown7 replied 28th Nov 2013 - 11 years ago
Hi, thanks for the good feedback. I didn't start out as being a dance/house track but as most of my music, mood took control!I like your suggestion of changing the drum tempo basis and wil have a go at it, a nice challenge!
Cheers
Steve
VickyDan
VickyDan 28th Nov 2013 10:29 - 11 years ago
Hello Steve ....

The rhythmic "beaches" used here, once again demonstrates your mastery of the subject muiscal. High quality hearing also.
This production is very good, and very catchy. As it brings a pleasant feeling of well being, even though the vinyl is a bit scratched .... Hahaha! I like it.

Dan
srbrown7
srbrown7 replied 28th Nov 2013 - 11 years ago
Hi Dan, thanks for the feedback...I think its pretty catchy too which is nice to hear from others.
Cheers
Steve
beerling1970
beerling1970 27th Nov 2013 22:15 - 11 years ago
FAVED..... this is such an awesome track, I am well impressed with how you did this track :)
Steve
srbrown7
srbrown7 replied 27th Nov 2013 - 11 years ago
Hi Steve,
thanks for the great feedback. I enjoyed making it so its really rewarding that its appreciated.
Cheers
Steve
crucethus
crucethus 27th Nov 2013 21:42 - 11 years ago
Love the intro, classic house! Awesome
srbrown7
srbrown7 replied 27th Nov 2013 - 11 years ago
Hi, thanks for the nice feedback.
Cheers
Steve
Polyfronetic
Polyfronetic 27th Nov 2013 16:20 - 11 years ago
Cool dance music with lot of energy inside, good job!
srbrown7
srbrown7 replied 27th Nov 2013 - 11 years ago
Cheers. I havent really gone big on sounds in my quicker tracks so thanks for the good feedback.
Regards
Steve

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