Nice groove, liked the harmonised vocals, well put together structure.
Great job!

Cool pop track! Catchy and the masses would eat this up. Relationships are the best singer/songwriter topics.

Wayne

Hola amigo Michael, bonito tema, buen ritmo y fantástica voz. Suena muy bien. Que tengas un buen día compañero. Paz y salud.

Mr. Mayo, I had a real good listen to this one. Every generation has had pop tunes since the advent of rock n roll. And usually, most pop tunes are forgettable due to one of a myriad of reasons. (too sugary, simple chords, not very creative,formulaic, and now in the Millenial and Z era, repeating consonants in the song). But in each of those generations, artists use those constraints and make something that stands above everyone else at the time. Sort of like everyone's drinking grape aid, and you bring to the table pure grape juice. This one is special. I am very impressed, I hope you can get this tune in the right hands because it is a perfect pop tune. Myself personally, I look for uniqueness and creativity, and off-beat sounds in the music I listen to, But I also appreciate a good song. This is a good Song. I believe if you just played this with a piano or an acoustic guitar it would still sound good. I wish you success, you already have the talent side wrapped up.

Hey Michael great track mate when something is about a relationship if you've been involved or close you can right about it in a vocal and that's what we have here great mate, and I hope your well, I've written a song about my relationship and marriage, mine, Maj is mastering it for me, but I can sing about it not to good tbf but I've been through it so the words are right, this track appeals to me in a similar way hence the length watch out for it girl or thought you were the one, not sure yet, but back to this it's great and gets a fav definitely