I think it's great

Great lyrics man, read them on the page as I did the second listen. Excellent work my friend. To thine self be true is the saying isn't it? Good luck with the recording.

I was reading your response to dimestop's comment and started thinking about our individual take and approach on songwriting/song topics. A lot of great singer/songwriters preach to be true to your own path, no matter where it takes you, as long as it feels right to you. I say sing about whatever make you feel you are doing the right thing inside your musical heart.

In a lot of my songs, the character is always down on his luck or in a bad situation, making bad decisions and getting into some kind of mischief. Life isn't perfect so write about it, right? It's relatable.

Liked the lyrics, well done!

Wayne

i was expecting this bro, you didn't disappoint. great writing and a cool delivery Randall, the female backing is sic too. nice music all round talking honest and hard issues, i like people that tackle these subjects, im not sure if its biographical to you but i expect you've had your moments bro, top work strong subject matter, very well done

Strong track, I like your vocal and the background vocal (female? or head voice?) works really well with it.

Good luck with the album/tape, I know how much work and frustration it is and also how much energy it can give you when finally finished!