YES YES YES
I do appreciate the desire for sonic structure, however
I feel that the stellar kick works WELL in it's rather loose
and unstructured surroundings, complimenting the entire
groove. A mix that completely draws me into the 'kick pocket' hat the vocals sit right into perfectly. I had this
looped on Windows Media Player for about an hour yesterday. Thanx 4 the upload.
and
free and unstructured

Very 70s but not sure if vocals fit on this one. But also don't know this genre. Well I guess they do. U definitely a black belt in music!

i’ve got this under my skin, mate. beautifully damaged, groovy as hell. really intriguing gtrs + electronics roomy but accumulating steam, awesome stuff happening by the 3.00 mark. the selection and placement of vox is extrasensory. weird, seething voodoo. cha cha cha.

Excellent. Love the laid back loose limbed feel of it. Guitars are awesome.

This is perfect for what it is. Are you singing the track?



The voice is phenomenal! You have a hook there, and it sounds amazing and you hit us with it right of the bat. I had to replay the track because I missed its presence. The nature of a hook is that people will miss it until you bring it back. Bring that thing back somewhere before the song ends.

Sometimes when I record a hook, I think "Oh, would peoples ears miss this in about a minute?". Music can really be powerful for the listener but they shouldn't have to starve if you know what I mean.

You also have a great start to a little verse in there starting with "baby let me lift you up" and "I don't want to let you fall in love" I know lyrics are hard to come up with, but I think it could use a few more.

The arrangement is perfect on the intro "bars" and sounds like a hook to me. Maybe cut out some of the cluttered together filler vox hits and lay those few bars from the beginning down again where they fit.

I think tracks like these really let peoples talent shine through. I'm hooked on the sound of the whole track. Do I think you should put a lot of time into refining it? No, I think you established yourself on the record in a really creative way that showcases your talent. You'll look back at this in a year and say, Wow!

I think this track reminds me of my track New Money... Its not on looperman anymore. I had to delete it to upload other songs. But you could find it on any streaming platform, spotify, apple music, youtube etc... here is a link

https://songwhip. com/johnniesmoke/new-money

I spaced out the .com FYI.



Great track again!

Johnnie

Ian! This one has strong potential. I’m imagining some fire changes off that bass line alone. The vocals are right in there but the whole track feel's just plain great. The guitars are lush and the percussive edge gives an undercurrent that resonates with me. This is off and running. Push it all the way through. Faved easily. Peace

Mark

although i was a little disappointed as i thought the track was about me, nope didn't even get a mention :))

Ian your the experimenter, i love what you try we;ve been good mates a while now, yeah it lacks a little structure vocal wise but the track is original and hits the indie genre too, nice job

Relaxed and elegant