Description : this is the track that Cyberflares hosted, i wrote it with the previous one same night but i re-done the master as it was a little busy, and the harmony was off. as Robin's on holiday, i thought i'd host it for a few days
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It is the way music touches our inner world. The writer of the lyrics really knows this great power and makes the most out of it. An excellent combination of the two and we have a beautiful song.
Very well done my friends
Best wishes, Anthony.
Anthony thank you for your words they are appreciated, being able to deliver a story with lyrics that the listener can picture and feel is what drives me to continue writing about life's struggles, we maybe from different countries speak a different language but we all have the same worries in general, we are as one and music is the best uniter of people
thanks John, i see it everyday my friend, people rushing round, losing their heads because they late not made enough money or whatever and yet we have thousands living on the streets all over the world, that are just ignored, stop buying tanks and buy houses
thanks Rita, i usually get a good balance to be fair, but i just kept changing them on this, still not heard from Lu, so i'll consider just me and you next maybe
Hello Paul, Congratulations on the text! I really like it. Your vocal presentation was also well done. There are a few minor weaknesses in the mix and mastering, but overall, its well done.
Best regards,
Manuela
hi Manuela, yes i heard them too, slight timing issues, so i have rectified them also, mainly the beginning, but anyway thanks for the feedback, its massive, i notice my mistakes more when i listen back on speakers, im proud of the lyrics in this that's why i have changed them so many times, Robins ran off to Spain for a break from it, he was like not again lol.
Bloody hell Paul thee amount of knickers you get thrown at you you could open a shop.
Tom Jones move over Paul is in town!
I love your tunes Paul the amount of emotion you putt into your lyrics come straight from the heart.
I love your work its like another tune gets put on the wall in the gallery for all to see.
You move fast when you make a tune mate I'd hate for you to be my boss lmao.
Take care mate and thanks for another banger.
im a good guy Darren, lol, you would probably be the one saying for F sake Paul that's fine, Paul, Paul thats a f wrap, lets have a pint, im parched bro, i just enjoy getting the words down and singing, i play keys too and drums but im not as mad on that as i am writing, i always check friends work genre is irrelevant if i like a tune all sing a song to it
I love the title and the lyrics and tune. Your voice is so distinctive and kudos to you for singing a la Brummy - it adds a whole new layer of authenticity. So Robin's gone a roving. His guitar really works with your vocal. Kay0s
thanks for the check Kay i spent a lot of time on this, i wrote two vocals to two tracks same night, wrote them easy enough, i was just not happy with the vocal on this the other was fine just layout i changed a bit and changed this about 6-7 times even tho Robin said there was nothing wrong, im happier now tho' and i thought the lyrics were catchy too, its exactly what i see, same people rushing round and stressed out and more homeless on the streets
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Very well done my friends
Best wishes, Anthony.
It does sound good.
I recognize the problem when you listen back over the speakers.
Sometimes I get shocked lol
Best regards,
Manuela
Take care Buddy.
Tom Jones move over Paul is in town!
I love your tunes Paul the amount of emotion you putt into your lyrics come straight from the heart.
I love your work its like another tune gets put on the wall in the gallery for all to see.
You move fast when you make a tune mate I'd hate for you to be my boss lmao.
Take care mate and thanks for another banger.