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15th Oct 2024 10:47 - 3 months ago
Description : this is the track that Cyberflares hosted, i wrote it with the previous one same night but i re-done the master as it was a little busy, and the harmony was off. as Robin's on holiday, i thought i'd host it for a few days

Comments (9)

If you have time take a listen and give dimestop some feedback.

XDOUSP
XDOUSP 18th Oct 2024 20:44 - 3 months ago
good stuff
dimestop
dimestop replied 19th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
thankyou for the listen bro appreciated
AnthonyAttard
AnthonyAttard 18th Oct 2024 16:59 - 3 months ago
It is the way music touches our inner world. The writer of the lyrics really knows this great power and makes the most out of it. An excellent combination of the two and we have a beautiful song.
Very well done my friends
Best wishes, Anthony.
dimestop
dimestop replied 18th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
Anthony thank you for your words they are appreciated, being able to deliver a story with lyrics that the listener can picture and feel is what drives me to continue writing about life's struggles, we maybe from different countries speak a different language but we all have the same worries in general, we are as one and music is the best uniter of people
JohnMatteson
JohnMatteson 18th Oct 2024 12:59 - 3 months ago
Wow this is so powerful and the image of one of our brothers down and out on the road and everybody too busy to notice or help. Beautiful work
dimestop
dimestop replied 18th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
thanks John, i see it everyday my friend, people rushing round, losing their heads because they late not made enough money or whatever and yet we have thousands living on the streets all over the world, that are just ignored, stop buying tanks and buy houses
RitajustRita
RitajustRita 17th Oct 2024 21:27 - 3 months ago
Hi Paul.
It does sound good.
I recognize the problem when you listen back over the speakers.
Sometimes I get shocked lol
dimestop
dimestop replied 18th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
thanks Rita, i usually get a good balance to be fair, but i just kept changing them on this, still not heard from Lu, so i'll consider just me and you next maybe
2Sisters
2Sisters 16th Oct 2024 13:52 - 3 months ago
Hello Paul, Congratulations on the text! I really like it. Your vocal presentation was also well done. There are a few minor weaknesses in the mix and mastering, but overall, its well done.
Best regards,
Manuela
dimestop
dimestop replied 16th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
hi Manuela, yes i heard them too, slight timing issues, so i have rectified them also, mainly the beginning, but anyway thanks for the feedback, its massive, i notice my mistakes more when i listen back on speakers, im proud of the lyrics in this that's why i have changed them so many times, Robins ran off to Spain for a break from it, he was like not again lol.
Cyberflares
Cyberflares 16th Oct 2024 08:12 - 3 months ago
Sounds gd man the spaces are pap on gd spacing your getting it my boy well done
dimestop
dimestop replied 16th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
cheers Robin, enjoy your break man, speak when your back mate, hope the weathers good and you all have had a good start to your holiday
DarrenHirst
DarrenHirst 15th Oct 2024 20:37 - 3 months ago
As long as you're having fun Paul that's all that matters.
Take care Buddy.
dimestop
dimestop replied 15th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
im really enjoying it mate
DarrenHirst
DarrenHirst 15th Oct 2024 18:49 - 3 months ago
Bloody hell Paul thee amount of knickers you get thrown at you you could open a shop.
Tom Jones move over Paul is in town!
I love your tunes Paul the amount of emotion you putt into your lyrics come straight from the heart.
I love your work its like another tune gets put on the wall in the gallery for all to see.
You move fast when you make a tune mate I'd hate for you to be my boss lmao.
Take care mate and thanks for another banger.
dimestop
dimestop replied 15th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
im a good guy Darren, lol, you would probably be the one saying for F sake Paul that's fine, Paul, Paul thats a f wrap, lets have a pint, im parched bro, i just enjoy getting the words down and singing, i play keys too and drums but im not as mad on that as i am writing, i always check friends work genre is irrelevant if i like a tune all sing a song to it
VintageNights
VintageNights 15th Oct 2024 12:47 - 3 months ago
I love the title and the lyrics and tune. Your voice is so distinctive and kudos to you for singing a la Brummy - it adds a whole new layer of authenticity. So Robin's gone a roving. His guitar really works with your vocal. Kay0s
dimestop
dimestop replied 15th Oct 2024 - 3 months ago
thanks for the check Kay i spent a lot of time on this, i wrote two vocals to two tracks same night, wrote them easy enough, i was just not happy with the vocal on this the other was fine just layout i changed a bit and changed this about 6-7 times even tho Robin said there was nothing wrong, im happier now tho' and i thought the lyrics were catchy too, its exactly what i see, same people rushing round and stressed out and more homeless on the streets

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