Description : I tried to even out the volume and removed the repetition in the chorus.
No idea if it's better now but I'm done with it
A man and a woman who were once a couple stand at the same crossroads.
So close and yet so far
They pretend not to see each other.
But then she softly calls his name which disappears in the wind.
Missed opportunity.
She will never forget him and his smile and maybe they will see each other again in another world
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It is a very emotional song Rita, very well sung by you.
I felt both "so close yet so far" and "so far yet so close". You do create the image of a person that keeps memories deep inside so even if "so far" always "so close". I really enjoyed the listen.
My best regards, Anthony
Rita, lovely Rita. How are you? I hope all is well.
I absolutely love that you sang in your native tongue! I can tell you were much more comfortable doing so, too. There is a definite difference between that and the English. It's far more relaxed and confident. For obvious reasons. Not to say the English parts aren't good. Because they are. But they just don't have that extra...well, extra. In my opinion, for what it's worth, you should do this more often!
As far as the song itself goes, I agree with Manuela on the mix. But the instrumentation works well. It almost has a Roger Waters (after Pink Floyd) vibe to it. Almost like Roger wrote a song for Marianne Faithful to sing. But it's still all Rita!
Job well done!
Take care,Rita.
Aaron.
Hi Valve..Aaron.
Im glad that you like it.Thank you.
Im agree that my language is more comfortable and its nice to sing in dutch.
But my Dutch voice is different then my English voice.
To sing something like blues i need my English voice.
Its more darker. I dont know why it is like that lol.
About the mix ,you and Manuela are right.I didd try to repair but this is the best i can do.
Hi Mom, you've been very productive lately. The song is beautiful, with what I could understand as a heartfelt message. Wonderfully sung, and the music fits perfectly as well. One small drawback, in my opinion, is that the vocals and music aren't always harmoniously balanced in the mix. At times, the vocals feel a bit too prominent to me. Of course, it's very challenging to find the right balance, especially since you probably didnt have the music available as stems. Still, its a lovely song with an excellent vocal performance from you! Love, your little one.
Hi little one .
Im glad you like it.
I try to fix it but i think its still not good but i cant get it better.
I dont know why i have a problem with it now.
I hear that the music is with to much bass or something...its disturbing but its not my music.
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Sleep nice
Nice that you like it despite the fact that it is Dutch
There is something i need to change so there will come a update
I felt both "so close yet so far" and "so far yet so close". You do create the image of a person that keeps memories deep inside so even if "so far" always "so close". I really enjoyed the listen.
My best regards, Anthony
Thanx for your compliment.
Yes you can be so close with some one but in the same time so far away.
Im glad that you didd enjoy my song.
I absolutely love that you sang in your native tongue! I can tell you were much more comfortable doing so, too. There is a definite difference between that and the English. It's far more relaxed and confident. For obvious reasons. Not to say the English parts aren't good. Because they are. But they just don't have that extra...well, extra. In my opinion, for what it's worth, you should do this more often!
As far as the song itself goes, I agree with Manuela on the mix. But the instrumentation works well. It almost has a Roger Waters (after Pink Floyd) vibe to it. Almost like Roger wrote a song for Marianne Faithful to sing. But it's still all Rita!
Job well done!
Take care,Rita.
Aaron.
Im glad that you like it.Thank you.
Im agree that my language is more comfortable and its nice to sing in dutch.
But my Dutch voice is different then my English voice.
To sing something like blues i need my English voice.
Its more darker. I dont know why it is like that lol.
About the mix ,you and Manuela are right.I didd try to repair but this is the best i can do.
Im glad you like it.
I try to fix it but i think its still not good but i cant get it better.
I dont know why i have a problem with it now.
I hear that the music is with to much bass or something...its disturbing but its not my music.