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3rd Apr 2025 13:58 - 1 week ago
Description : I tried to even out the volume and removed the repetition in the chorus.
No idea if it's better now but I'm done with it

A man and a woman who were once a couple stand at the same crossroads.
So close and yet so far
They pretend not to see each other.
But then she softly calls his name which disappears in the wind.
Missed opportunity.
She will never forget him and his smile and maybe they will see each other again in another world

Comments (7)

If you have time take a listen and give RitajustRita some feedback.

2Sisters
2Sisters 5th Apr 2025 14:07 - 1 week ago
Top!! I think you've now found the harmonious middle ground. Excellent! Best regards, your little one.
RitajustRita
RitajustRita replied 5th Apr 2025 - 1 week ago
Thanx little one...iit took blood sweat and tears lol
Sleep nice
VTNights
VTNights 4th Apr 2025 23:42 - 1 week ago
Such an emotional song. What a beautiful way working with the past. I really love it. Cheers, Oli
RitajustRita
RitajustRita replied 5th Apr 2025 - 1 week ago
Thank you so much Oli.
Nice that you like it despite the fact that it is Dutch
Kayos2
Kayos2 4th Apr 2025 10:06 - 1 week ago
So emotional - ur voice carries the blues and pain across the verses like the wind carries fallen Autumn leaves - beautiful Kay
RitajustRita
RitajustRita replied 4th Apr 2025 - 1 week ago
Thank you Kay.
There is something i need to change so there will come a update
AnthonyAttard
AnthonyAttard 4th Apr 2025 08:39 - 1 week ago
It is a very emotional song Rita, very well sung by you.
I felt both "so close yet so far" and "so far yet so close". You do create the image of a person that keeps memories deep inside so even if "so far" always "so close". I really enjoyed the listen.
My best regards, Anthony
RitajustRita
RitajustRita replied 4th Apr 2025 - 1 week ago
Hi Anthony.
Thanx for your compliment.
Yes you can be so close with some one but in the same time so far away.
Im glad that you didd enjoy my song.
fanisatt
fanisatt 4th Apr 2025 06:17 - 1 week ago
Lovely song - lovely vocals !!!
RitajustRita
RitajustRita replied 4th Apr 2025 - 1 week ago
Thank you so much.
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 4th Apr 2025 01:30 - 1 week ago
Rita, lovely Rita. How are you? I hope all is well.
I absolutely love that you sang in your native tongue! I can tell you were much more comfortable doing so, too. There is a definite difference between that and the English. It's far more relaxed and confident. For obvious reasons. Not to say the English parts aren't good. Because they are. But they just don't have that extra...well, extra. In my opinion, for what it's worth, you should do this more often!
As far as the song itself goes, I agree with Manuela on the mix. But the instrumentation works well. It almost has a Roger Waters (after Pink Floyd) vibe to it. Almost like Roger wrote a song for Marianne Faithful to sing. But it's still all Rita!
Job well done!
Take care,Rita.
Aaron.
RitajustRita
RitajustRita replied 4th Apr 2025 - 1 week ago
Hi Valve..Aaron.
Im glad that you like it.Thank you.
Im agree that my language is more comfortable and its nice to sing in dutch.
But my Dutch voice is different then my English voice.
To sing something like blues i need my English voice.
Its more darker. I dont know why it is like that lol.
About the mix ,you and Manuela are right.I didd try to repair but this is the best i can do.
2Sisters
2Sisters 3rd Apr 2025 16:11 - 1 week ago
Hi Mom, you've been very productive lately. The song is beautiful, with what I could understand as a heartfelt message. Wonderfully sung, and the music fits perfectly as well. One small drawback, in my opinion, is that the vocals and music aren't always harmoniously balanced in the mix. At times, the vocals feel a bit too prominent to me. Of course, it's very challenging to find the right balance, especially since you probably didnt have the music available as stems. Still, its a lovely song with an excellent vocal performance from you! Love, your little one.
RitajustRita
RitajustRita replied 4th Apr 2025 - 1 week ago
Hi little one .
Im glad you like it.
I try to fix it but i think its still not good but i cant get it better.
I dont know why i have a problem with it now.
I hear that the music is with to much bass or something...its disturbing but its not my music.

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