Wow. There is so much here to like I dont know where to start. I'll just say....it is killer. You are a very talented person. Keep em' coming looperfriend.

I really like the timing signature that you used on this track

jeah this track is goood... exellent work man....

i agree with travis on the drum's, unfortunately i have to say that this track is more like a progressive Techno track than Trance, the mix down is muddy, try using a low cut on a lot of things to leave room for your kick drum, also fruity basic kick drum is bad, look for VEC Vengeance Essential Clubbers. they are amazing drums, layer a few of those up and you can't lose,

also i think it would be wise to consider learning to play the keyboard and how it works, once you have mastered major and minor scales, you have the basic knowledge to start producing a reasonable track, i mean, alternating patterns are ok in bridge sections, however people are moved my by big melodic compositions.

try listening to tracks that you like, but this time instead of listening to them, write down everything you hear and then reference that back to your music, sit back and think, how did they do that etc and try to interpret these techniques within your own music, don't just look at trance look at all genres, you can take bits and bobs from everything.

anyway, sorry if i put a downer on you, but just keep trying, everybody starts somewhere, good luck in the future...

I hope you wont get mad at me for my review. This one is a lot better than that other track were you called me an "asshole." anyway this one sounds pretty good, but I think you need some better drum samples. There are many great free drum samples(Meanbeat has some good ones.} I didn't mean to upset you over the review of your other track. I was just trying to help, I thought that is what you wanted.

Nice texture of sounds! I think to sweeten it up, you could pan some of your layers a little more. Make some kinda faze from ear to ear. Good changes and good mix overall.

really like some of the changes you have in here! Lookin forward to hearin more of your stuff!

nice intro....good beats....changes are great.
welcome to looperman....I look forward to hearing more of your work
Trax

This has thump, which I like. The changes are not gentle, which again I like. Kind of keeps me quessing what you are going to do next - which I like very much.
Well done, can't wait to see/hear what you do next.
Downloaded for sure - thank you for that.