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16th Nov 2009 23:14 - 15 years ago
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Description : Okay Okay :) hehehe , Finally The Track is Updated and Finished .

-Bassline Modified ( Added Low Toned Bass To Strengthen The Bassline )

-Elements Added

-Melody Tweaked + Changed Its Sound

-BreakDown Modifed + Masterized

-Raised BPM to 130

:) im really happy about this track , feelin satisfied about it
it kinda explains what goes on my mind , somehow its as if ure in a really big arena with Poles On Squares Arranged One Next To The other , until u can see them disappear behind that thin line over the horizon hehe .

Thanks All for the comments it helped alot !!!

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give NemesisV1 some feedback.

siensystem
siensystem 19th Nov 2009 19:31 - 15 years ago
I had heard this a few days back and just heard it again so I could comment. I like the panning of the resonant style hats, very cool. Nice use of gating effects. I like the hoover style little effect you had in there before it transitions into a 8-bit style synths, those were really cool also. nice bends. Quite the cool track, though I think it most as electro than trance; regardless, keep up the good work.
SYNTHIZIZ
SYNTHIZIZ 19th Nov 2009 17:51 - 15 years ago
yes send me the loops...but i need you to send to
djvissid_synthiziz@yahoo.com ..lol this is where i upload my loops from cause myspace corrupts the mp3 format somehow..so when you get the chance send to that address and give me a shout on myspace e-mail let me know you sent them so i can retreive them :'0 lol sound like alot of bull chit but thats just how i have everything set up...yahoo to send and recieve loops and myspace to send and recieve e-amil.
this will be a fun track to work on and i will get started on things on my off time from the christmas collab!
thanks man
SYNTHIZIZ
NemesisV1
NemesisV1 replied Unknown
Ama send u the FL File Hehe Feel Free to do whatever u feel

OK SENT
SYNTHIZIZ
SYNTHIZIZ 19th Nov 2009 17:13 - 15 years ago
LOL i was, have been in the hospital for a while but im back and better than ever...i must finish with this christmas callab that we are working on..i have done all my parts but i have the vocalist Rachelle german coming over the studio and im recording and looping her vocals and then i will be done with this. probally by the end of next week cause she will be out of town untill the beginning of the week.
you must forgive me but i dont remember if we picked out a specific track to do...if i did do you remember what it was called?cause if i picked one i am sure i D/L it into my collab productionz folder..which has alot in it already... add my myspace page bro for this is where i use and recieve e-mail at
www.myspace.com/djsynthiziz...
talk to you soon man and great job on the adjustments to the song!
NemesisV1
NemesisV1 replied Unknown
Well go0d thing ure back , i hope it wasnt anythin serious ???

btw i voted for Time Warp hehehe , well catchy tune what can i say .

as for the track i dont think we chose one but if we have to pick one , ide go for Poles On Squares the latest track i did ofcourse .

Much better and its smoother to bend and modify and mix , in case u want the loops i have em , and prepared them for this occasion .

anyways go0d luck with ure collab mate , and best of wishes Happy Early Christmas mate :)
SYNTHIZIZ
SYNTHIZIZ 17th Nov 2009 19:03 - 15 years ago
YO MAN I LOVE WHAT YOU BREAK INTO! this is hot man keep doing what your doing...i think maybe you could double up on the kick cause i think it would really put more pund into this already hot track
NemesisV1
NemesisV1 replied Unknown
Heh thanks mate :) i thought we were supposed to release a remix for one of my tracks ?? where did u disappear ?

as for the others i agree , bassline have been raised , and many other elements have been modified , i think ama upload it once im satisfied .
bcway
bcway 17th Nov 2009 05:19 - 15 years ago
Not much I can add, I agree with Flintlock on the bass line, in addition to his advice, I would also give the bass line more depth, more presence...not enough to thump your eardrums into the next universe, but enough to show you mean business.
Anyhow I liked your track, well done.
Flintlock
Flintlock 16th Nov 2009 23:48 - 15 years ago
Hay Man, thats some great sounds, i like the movement of your main sound, the bass line is good, complexed, the tracks good the way it is, kind of a winding down track. Now you say you have hit a wall, if i was going to remix that track i would probly, simplefly the bass line and give the bassline a sence of speed (the off beat bass) and up the tempo around 140, the breakdown is nice, like the break beat. sorry for the spelling im not the best, well that my throughts. its a good track:)

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