Hello jet!
I was inspired by your song and recorded the second verse. I think this is what you need)
I emailed you, but you didn't get an answer. If the collaboration is still relevant, please contact me and I will send you the song that we have turned out :)
Amazing track. I agree with Eric on the autotune, which is one of my pet peeves, but you know what, this track is so rock solid I don't even mind. Great job!
Saw your post in the forum and decided to check out your stuff. You are clearly a very good vocalist and definitely know how to compose a catchy, contemporary sounding melody. There is no question in my mind that this track is the best one you have posted here to Looperman. Vocal is clean, backing instrumental track works well. Definitely has a Weeknd feel and sound to it. Your vocal on your most recent track, “Insecure” has a Sam Smith flavour. Those are two great artists, so that’s high praise in my opinion. For your own unique sound, I guess maybe a hybrid of the two would be a good place to try.
All that said, I’m not a fan of the vocals on “insecure” or “Dancing With the Devil” because, in my opinion, you’ve largely, if not completely, masked your really excellent clean vocal delivery, with too much gimmicky processing, autotune, vocoder, or whatever. It’s like you aren’t secure enough in the quality of your delivering just a clean vocal, like you did with “Electric”, so you think you need to tart it up so the track sounds more distinctive. I think that’s a real mistake and if I was producing you, I’d definitely try to convince you to drop all that stuff and just deliver vocals that really showcase your great voice. Clean, with the focus on communicating meaning and emotion. That’s not to suggest that you shouldn’t use autotune sparingly, or reverb, double or triple tracking, compression, delays, tube-based saturation, etc. Just tastefully, and to make your vocals really shine in the tracks.
That’s my attempt at constructive comments. I realize that my reaction to your tracks might be out of touch with some of the more progressive music that’s being produced now, but I can hear in your vocals and in your compositions, the potential for some really special music. I think you need to focus your tracks on your two great strengths - your sense of melody and your vocal ability. Don’t let anything get in the way, or detract from those. If it’s not working in service to those, don’t include them in the track.
And, if you ever decide to post an acapella here on Looperman please let me know via a DM. I’d love to try my hand at doing a backing track for one of your vocals.
Regards from snowy (and soon to be very cold) Ottawa
Holy...
At first it Sounds very 303 like but when the Vocals come in its pure Spark and Joy.
I would put an more Harsh DeEsser on the Voice and watch the Phasing but other than that this Track is Amazing.
If you need an Visualizer for that Track hmu and please send it to me when its done i will also share it for you everywhere.
Absolute Banger!
There is a pop on my left ear around 4 seconds which could be fixed if it is not intentional. Also, could you maybe mention a few reference tracks on the style you are going for?
I do say that this beat 'tis to be busting.
this shall be the spookiest of songs I've orienteered on this website application.
this is the pinnacle of scary trap music.
A job well done I suppose.
on Electric by Jhet
I was inspired by your song and recorded the second verse. I think this is what you need)
I emailed you, but you didn't get an answer. If the collaboration is still relevant, please contact me and I will send you the song that we have turned out :)
on Insecure by Jhet
https://youtu.be/uGZaSWLPZ-o
on Electric by Jhet
on Insecure by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
Saw your post in the forum and decided to check out your stuff. You are clearly a very good vocalist and definitely know how to compose a catchy, contemporary sounding melody. There is no question in my mind that this track is the best one you have posted here to Looperman. Vocal is clean, backing instrumental track works well. Definitely has a Weeknd feel and sound to it. Your vocal on your most recent track, “Insecure” has a Sam Smith flavour. Those are two great artists, so that’s high praise in my opinion. For your own unique sound, I guess maybe a hybrid of the two would be a good place to try.
All that said, I’m not a fan of the vocals on “insecure” or “Dancing With the Devil” because, in my opinion, you’ve largely, if not completely, masked your really excellent clean vocal delivery, with too much gimmicky processing, autotune, vocoder, or whatever. It’s like you aren’t secure enough in the quality of your delivering just a clean vocal, like you did with “Electric”, so you think you need to tart it up so the track sounds more distinctive. I think that’s a real mistake and if I was producing you, I’d definitely try to convince you to drop all that stuff and just deliver vocals that really showcase your great voice. Clean, with the focus on communicating meaning and emotion. That’s not to suggest that you shouldn’t use autotune sparingly, or reverb, double or triple tracking, compression, delays, tube-based saturation, etc. Just tastefully, and to make your vocals really shine in the tracks.
That’s my attempt at constructive comments. I realize that my reaction to your tracks might be out of touch with some of the more progressive music that’s being produced now, but I can hear in your vocals and in your compositions, the potential for some really special music. I think you need to focus your tracks on your two great strengths - your sense of melody and your vocal ability. Don’t let anything get in the way, or detract from those. If it’s not working in service to those, don’t include them in the track.
And, if you ever decide to post an acapella here on Looperman please let me know via a DM. I’d love to try my hand at doing a backing track for one of your vocals.
Regards from snowy (and soon to be very cold) Ottawa
Eric
on Insecure by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Electric by Jhet
on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
At first it Sounds very 303 like but when the Vocals come in its pure Spark and Joy.
I would put an more Harsh DeEsser on the Voice and watch the Phasing but other than that this Track is Amazing.
If you need an Visualizer for that Track hmu and please send it to me when its done i will also share it for you everywhere.
Absolute Banger!
on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
on Dancing With The Devil by Jhet
Nice flow with a soft stomping 4/4 Kick. Like youre on the way to a have nice party in a sunny afternoon, Friday!
good job, go for it!
on Run Instrumental by Jhet
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/225972
on Run Instrumental by Jhet
this shall be the spookiest of songs I've orienteered on this website application.
this is the pinnacle of scary trap music.
A job well done I suppose.