Deff sounds unfinished! So, yeah its a rough cut! Just get working and finish it lol because i wanna hear it.
Its good tho. Like the chill flowing feeling of it
Thanks for the honest review man... I had to put this on the back burner a while ago because I am working on three new tracks that are almost finished...(they sound more like the "Lockstep" song I uploaded; really trying to work on my mixing skills.
Firstly want to apologise for not getting here sooner, like the affect of the off percussion?? works really well, nice beat, nice synths, help it ll work and move along at very relaxing place, clarity is nice OH it finished, mate love what you have done so fars with this one, look forward to hearing a longer version when it gets here, very good work so fars...Peace n Respect...Estefano...
To me this is hip-hop.I like the Dj Shadow-style of your song.
I just wish it was a bit longer(in that in mind i did a longer version of your song for my own amusement).lol.
Theres very good ideas in your song,if you can make a longer intro and an bridge of about 8 bars or so using the 1:13 parts(without the drums)elsewhere in your song that would be really sweet.
BTW-I can send you the extended version if you want.
Thanks for the listen.. you are absolutely right, it would need some more bump if it was exclusively a hip hop track... glad I kept it in the fusion category ;)
the drums in this song are so good. reminds me of one of my fav artists, flying lotus. def check him out if you havent heard cuz these drums sound a lot like his. just the overall sound is real cool. keep it up man
Thanks for the kind words man(especially on the drums!), Yes I have heard of Flying Lotus and absolutely love his music... it definitely made an impact on me!
Cool track, great groove to it, it feels almost staggering and off... in a good way.
Some kind of break or B section would be nice, something to just change it up halfway or 2/3 of the way through just to keep things interesting, and then mixing back in the original elements.
But for a rough cut this is solid cool.
Thanks for the review... I was looking for the "off" feel, glad to know I'm in the right direction. I'm definitely going to put your advice to use. Thanks!
I love when I`m the first to review. Let`s start with listing what`s wrong with this track. Okay, nothing, but some people like reviews to be critical. There we go, this track is too damn good. You have to mess with it and screw it up somehow. LOL. Great track, my friend, wouldn`t change a note.
This was a very simple track but well put together and real clean! the only suggestion i would have with it would be kicking in the horns a little earlier? there is an expectancy within the music where you expect something to happen at a certain time and it came in a little late love the drawn out horns sound! and the ending was a little abrupt for me, (kinda like falling off of a cliff?)
Tracks like this is why I like hip hop and often make sure to relate the differences between hip hop and gansta rap MTV BS, to those who do not differentiate and care to know!
Overall, this is nice clean track, attractivly simplistic very relaxing on the ears and spirt execllent arabic sounding violins, definatly needs some vocals to match!
Good stuff keeweet, love the violin samples and the placement to keep the melody going and are those flutes I hear ? The drum hits are on point, the flow seems as if it needs a few more hits or crashes here and there to break it up a little but in no way is that a bad thing, just a thought. Still a nice track man. Keep em comin.
Thank you Jdot for the feedback. Yes you do hear flutes on the track (nice ear). I will definitely look at breaking up the drums a bit, as I can see how it could be a little un-spicy... by the way I checked out some of your tracks... Extremely deep repertoire. Nice!
on Lockstep by keeweet
Very good...
on Lockstep by keeweet
Kenny Lee
on CrunkBar by keeweet
Its good tho. Like the chill flowing feeling of it
on CrunkBar by keeweet
Firstly want to apologise for not getting here sooner, like the affect of the off percussion?? works really well, nice beat, nice synths, help it ll work and move along at very relaxing place, clarity is nice OH it finished, mate love what you have done so fars with this one, look forward to hearing a longer version when it gets here, very good work so fars...Peace n Respect...Estefano...
on Rev5 by keeweet
I just wish it was a bit longer(in that in mind i did a longer version of your song for my own amusement).lol.
Theres very good ideas in your song,if you can make a longer intro and an bridge of about 8 bars or so using the 1:13 parts(without the drums)elsewhere in your song that would be really sweet.
BTW-I can send you the extended version if you want.
Nel
on CrunkBar by keeweet
yet thats just me.
on Rev5 by keeweet
on Lockstep by keeweet
I really like this. A beautiful mash-up of several musical influences. Ambient, hip-hop, electronica. Yet it has a style of its own.
NIcely done.
on CrunkBar by keeweet
on Lockstep by keeweet
on CrunkBar by keeweet
Some kind of break or B section would be nice, something to just change it up halfway or 2/3 of the way through just to keep things interesting, and then mixing back in the original elements.
But for a rough cut this is solid cool.
on Lockstep by keeweet
All The Best
John
on July by keeweet
How about calling it 'Forgotten Future'???
Keep banging them out bruv
on Rev5 by keeweet
on Rev5 by keeweet
on Rev5 by keeweet
check out our tracks
love and peace
Genyu-Force family
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Gord
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on Mae Eye by keeweet
other than that it was a real nice mix!
Johnny Gadget
Gadgetland Music Factory
on Mae Eye by keeweet
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on Marionette by keeweet
Overall, this is nice clean track, attractivly simplistic very relaxing on the ears and spirt execllent arabic sounding violins, definatly needs some vocals to match!
-K
on Marionette by keeweet
J DOT ~ 2006